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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 1:55 pm    Post subject: :: Angel Eyes :: Reply with quote
Hiyaa I hope u like this! You might have read it before as I had posted it on bb but I decided to repost it onhere Mr. Green
Plz leave ur reviews!

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It was a dark, cold and snowy night... No people to be found on the streets, exept for Chloe and Jake.
-My hands are freezing! but more and they fall off! Jake blurred out holding his cup of hot coffee...
-And what do u want me to do about it? Chloe replied and rolled her eyes laughing.
-Cant we just go sit inside that nice restaurant ovathere? I swear nothing is goin to happen its under 0° degree's enyone who's out on the streets is mad!... like us!
-And what if something happens while were sitting nice hot and warm? Jake grab a donut and eat then ull get warm!
"Attention all units asked to hallington bridge, Car accident, 2 cars involved, 4 wounded, ambulance on its way"
-and who wanted to sit in a restaurant now? she said rolled her eyes and started the car. She jumped outside as they arrived and ran to the wracked car.
-Where's that ambulance?! check it Jake!
-doin it... doin it!
-my god, she thought to herself as she looked inside the car, a youn woman full of blood, a young man leaning on his steering well blood running down his face and in the backside a young child, slowely opening here eyes...
-hey there, chloe said and smiled
-ma...mammy?
-shh sweety everything is goin to be ok. do u feel ok? u got pain enywhere? ur belly? she asked when the girl pointed at her belly, were gonna take care of that soon ok? Im gonna take a look at ur mummy and daddy ok? She reached out and searched for a pulse but none to be found... Jake! she yelled again.
-theyre here! he yelled from outside the truck, this one's dead! he yelled at the doc's...
Chloe feared the same for the father, but he was still alive. I need help here! she yelled and looked back at the young girl and smiled. Is that ur teddy bear? she asked and the young girl nodded. Does he have a name?
-pops... she replied soft
-hey, stay wiv me, look at me...
-Is someone coming!? she yelled angry... no look at me stay wiv me sweety... stay wiv me!

The young girl was in critical condition, same as her father... she had already lost her mother, hopefully they both survive....
The next day Chloe went to check on them, in that night they girl had died, she had lost to many blood, her dad was doin better, but she couldnt think how much of a shock it would come to him if he hears he lost his daughter and girlfriend at the same time...

-1 year later-
-Yo ice! bring me a beer will ya?
-its Chloe for u, only friends call me ice! she replied and threw him his beer.
-never heard of giving it?
-never heard of getting up and get it urselve? she snapped and walked out.
-ooh seems someone is in a mood!
-I think someone is searching for attention, duncan said and rolled his eyes.
-oi shut it you!
-Chris please, Jake said rolling his eyes
-she's not interested in u, duncan said and laughed
-oh and u think she's interested in u? ur gay!
-I am not gay! he yelled
-guyz please! cant u for once shut ur big mouths? and Chris get of dunc's back, its not cuz he hasnt slept with half the neighbourhood like u that he's gay!
-auch, and thank u! dunc said sipping of his cup of coffee.
-wel seems like my time is over, see ya all tomorrow and please dont kill eachother while im away.
-never will! bye! Jake said and waved.
She changed into her Jeans, white top and vest and walked out onto the streets. For once it had stopped snowing and it was getting warmer, Still there werent alot of people on the streets, exept for children throwing snowballs at eachother, soon they would have to go inside cuz it was getting pretty dark... Chloe sighted and looked at the stars in the sky and the snow started falling down again.
-Great! she said and rolled her eyes, She turned into an alley at the corner of the street to get a shortcut home. She stopped and turned to look around, she heard someone, a faint voice, like he was hurt...
-Hello? Who is there? she called out
-H...help...
-O god, are u ok? she ran to a guy lying down, shivering and his arms wrapped around him, He shook his head and removed his hands from his side.
-Whats wrong? she had now put her hand on his side and saw blood... She looked him in the eyes, he had beautiful eyes... She helped him stand up and as her house was right around the corner desided to take him home with her...
-Whats ur name? she asked opening the front door and throwing her vest on the table...
He looked at her... Ryder, he replied
-Im Chloe, she said and smiled
-hey...
-Now let me take a look at that, she said kneeling down infront of him, he pulled up his Shirt and a stabwound appeared.
-how did this happen? she looked at him questioning, but he didnt reply, wait here, Ill get things to clean it... U have to trust me, she replied when she saw the fear in his eyes... he nodded and looked around.
-Im back, now im just gonna pull ur trousers down a little bit to have a better look at it, and dont worry they ent goin down the whole way, she laughed and for the first time a smile came on his face...
-now this may sting abit... she said
-its done, she said and smiled and walked into the kitchen.
-thanks...
-wooow WOOOW whats goin on here? Chris said pointing at Ryder
-nothing, I was helping him, and WHAT are u doin here may I ask?
-door woz open, let myself in...
-whell thats nice! what do u want?
-wanted to ask u if u wanted to go out and have a dinner?
-no thank u im not interested, and im im quite bussy so if u would want to leave now that would be great thanks!
-but Chloe...
-Chris get out! she yelled.
-im goin, im goin, he said putting his hands in the air and walked out the door...
-that was quite...cold, ryder said
-thats why my friends call me Ice, she said and laughed, besides chris is... chris... he thinks all girls are interested in him but not me, eeelk!
-ah, he said and looked around, well I should be goin now... thanks for helping me out...
-dont u want a cup of coffee? and I just cleaned out the wound its quite deep, u should let my dad take a look at that, he's a doctore and...
-I cant affort a doctor, he said walking towards the door.
-U dont have to pay him, its ok, in no way are u walking out that door the other way, u are goin to my dad! she said
-im not getting out this am I?
-nope I made my mind and u ARE goin! she said helped him in her car and drove him to her dad.

+next morning+
-ooh look who we have here! Chris yelled when Chloe walked in
-Oi shut it you! she replied and rolled her eyes.
-whats all this between u 2?
-I was at her house last night, saw her doin some business wiv a guy, u know...
-Oi thats sooooooo not true! She said and pushed him agains the wall.
-wow ok Ice relax! Jake said removing her from Chris.
-I found him, he was wounded and I helped him out ok? get ur stinky nose out of my business ok? Djeezez whats up wiv u! she yelled walking away

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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 2:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
visuality:

Jack

Chloe

Chris

Duncan

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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*will review later*
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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 4:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Moose wrote:
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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Mr. Green

Eeeeeks how groovy. Shocked

I want more. Very HappyVery Happy
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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
you waant moreee? shall I give u moree? +thinks+
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+giggles+ Alright ill go find the add Wink
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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
-what do u mean wiv he's gone?
-He's gone hun, chloe's dad replied
-Just like that? HOW? she yelled true her phone.
-ur mother went to make his breaky and then when she got back he was gone..., wasnt that nice of him...
-great, really!
-and it was you who let a total stranger sleep at our house?
-Oh c'mon dad, I couldnt let him out on the streets like that! besides it was so u could check on that wound of him!
-wel seems now not enymore but I got to go got a patient coming in bye!
-bye, she sighted and closed her phone...
-whats up wiv that weird friend of yours?chris said popping his head inside
-If u say one more word I swear im gonna kill u wiv my bare hands! she snapped and walked to duncan.
-ya moody or something? he asked
-No! and u know I cant have chris from the moment he started working here! always running after the girls, she said shaking her head
-now thats true...
-Cmon, get ur lazzy ass off ur desk and get in the car we need to go to Danny's...
-What? AGAIN? I swear if he hurted her again I...
-ICE! Jake said shaking his head
-sorry! Chloe replied and got in the car...

-Nellie? where are u!? she yelled walking inside the house... NEL!
-inhere, she replied
-Nel... OMG look at you! did he do that?
-It was my fault...
-Nel, did he do that yes or no?
-It was not like he wanted to do it, it was my fault u got to believe me...
-oh yes like the previous times he beat u up? look at you, ur a beautiful girl, now all I see is brouses... nel u cant let him do this to you... Where is he?
-he cares about me, he did it cuz it was my fault.
-It WASNT ok? he has NO right to beat u up like that! where is he? is he at the back? Chloe turned around and stormed outside... Look at what u did? u think this is funny? Oh yeah u like beating her up or what? u little.... she yelled and pushed him at the back...
-Chloe calm down... duncan said
-let her do... jake replied him.
-What would u think if someone beated u up like that huh? THIS ISNT A GAME! u wanna know how it feels? FEEL THIS! she replied and hit him in the face...
-Ouch! u cant do that, she cant do that! he said holding his hand against his bleeding lip
-ur coming wiv us, dunc said and hadncuffed him...
-Ice relax now ok? Jake said holding her back.
-HE has no right! NO RIGHT AT ALL!
-did u see that? she hit me, right in my face, did u see? she cant do that!
-all I see is a cop doin her job, nothing else, did she hit u? oh im sorry I must have missed that... jake said turning around
Meanwhile at the other side of town...
-I need it! please... Ryder begged
-No money, no drugs...
-I will give u the money soon!
-I still need ur share from the last time... when's that coming huh?
-I will get it soon
-soon, thats all what I hear, If I dont get it by the end of this week, ur gonna be a dead man! he replied dropping a small bag in Ryder's hands, filled with white powder... Cocaine.

Do you ever feel like breaking down?
Do you ever feel out of place?
Like somehow you just dont belong
And no one understands you

Do you ever wanna run away?
Do you lock yourself in your room?
With the radio on turned up so loud
That no one hears you screaming
© Simple Plan - Welcome to my life


-Ice u will get urselve into trouble someday...
-what is he goin to do? call the cops? I AM A COP! she yelled out throwing her coat on her bureau and sat down...
-thats why im telling u this!
-I CANT JUST LET HIM DO THAT TO HER! she yelled
-thats what we are for, but u dont need to go and hit him!
-he deserved it! she lost a fkn baby due to him!
-I know, and im not saying what he does is ok but... u cant solve it by doin ur thing...
-what she do? beat someone up? chris said wide eyed
-aaaaaaaaaargh! she screamed and walked into the little kitchen getting herself a cup of coffee.
-Chloe u need to calm down u know... duncan said
-anger management lessons! Chris yelled from behind his desk
-I will out my anger on u if u dont shut it! she yelled and put down her cup of coffee...., Im sorry dunc, its just, Chris is working on my nerves, Danny, well I cant just let him beat up my niece and...
-Care to talk about something else then?
-I would love to... she said and jumped on the table to sit down.
-whats this about a weird friend? u know the one who came wiv u last night?
-u heard my story, found him, helped him out, drove him to my dad, went bk home wiv him, showed him the spare room, went downstairs, looked tv and went to sleep, NOTHING happened...
-and im not saying enything did, dunc said and laughed, is he good looking?
-now thats why everyone thinks ur gay, chris said popping his head inside.
-Chris would u mind? were talking here, chloe said calmly but she wasnt she would rather kill him right there at that moment...
-Chloe? CHLOE! djeez is she even listening? jake said walking towards the kitchen... ICE! he yelled
-what? she asked nearly falling of the table
-there's a friend of u here... he wants to speak to u, Ryder, or something like that...
-twas bout time! she jumped off the table and walked inside the hallway, hey, she said and smiled.
-hi, he said and looked down
-what u doin here?
-I um, want to ask u something...
-and that is? she opened the door and sat down on a chair there, we can talk better here then there...she explained
-I...I need money, he said and looked up
-well... she said quite shocked about his question...
-what u need to money for?
-I um, I need to have it for my... my sick mother.. .thats why, he said not looking her in the eyes...
-ur mother? what she have?
-she ehm she's got cancer and... uhm... my brother and me are alone at home and...
-Ryder, I...
-Please Chloe, please! he begged
-Will this be enough? she handed him some money
-I hope so, he whispered and looked up, thank u..
-thats ok... do u and ur brother wanna go out for dinner tonight?
-NO...no thank u, I ... I need to go, bye Ryder stood up and walked away..
-wow thats a freak! Chris said walking past him, you Ice u noticed his dilated pupils? freakkky! did u just gave him money? woop for what? u paying for his drugs and alcohol now ?
-oh chris just F*ck you! she rolled her eyes and walked out, she didnt know Chris actually was right and she had just payed him his drugs...
something really has to change, duncan said
-what u wanna do? ask him ovathere to fire chris? like thats goin to happen, Ice just needs to kalm down on him how irritating he may be...
-I guess...
-so whats the deal? Ice asked walking towards them
-nothing, its pretty quiet, go home... if we need u well call!
-u shure?
-yeh pretty shure, jake replied and smiled
-thank u, she said and walked out.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Aight nadine, here's anuva chapter +lol+


+a week later+
-We got one piece of da puzzel! Joe cheered coming in
-u do? duncan asked raising an eyebrown
-yeah we got JR, u know from da gang? Drugs? ring any bells?
-ooh yeh, now it does, he replied and laughed, white powder, pills, uhum!
-well hopefully he will lead us to the others then...
-he said enything yet? Ice asked
-nothing, well that he's hungry oh and that he doesnt know a thing bout what were talking about...
-Let Ice talk to him, jake joked, she'll get it out pretty soon I bet
-yeh let me talk to him, Chloe said
-I wasnt beeing serious...
-but I am! she replied
-u shure?
-yeah, yeah, she said picked the papers out of his hand and walked away.
-I soo wanna see that! Dunc said jumping off his desk and runned after her...
-So JR...
-as I said I dont kno enything man!
-JR u are know as a member of that gang dont go playing around wiv us!
-Ok so I am, that doesnt mean I kno where they are!
-Weve found... ur cellphone, she looked in the papers, u dailed the same number 10 times, whats that all about?
-I called my mum...
-We checked wiv her, she hasnt heard from u in years... JR talk to me!
-I dont know where the F*ck the are! he yelled
-Weve got u here now for bout a day? maybe 2... dont u get the feeling u need more... u want ur drugs huh? guess what UR NOT GETTING ANY! well maybe I can get u sum if u tell me...
-u...u will?
-aha, so u know where they are then?
-No.... I... well... Im not telling...
-Jerome Reed, where are they? she demanded, but he just looked around
-SPEAK godamned! she threw the papers on the table wiv a bang and walked over to him... TALK! im not beeing nice enymore now... U will tell me where they are right now! are they at the empty wearhouse? the garage? WHERE?!
-a...at the lake... the empty house....
-thank u babe, she said smiled and picked up the papers
-now do I get my drugs?
-In ur dreams mate, u really think we would give that to you?
-well yeah...
-sorry mate WRONG ANSWER, were not stupid u know! were done here, take him wiv u, she said to Joe and walked out...

The made a plan, looked at their options and some time later a team of 6 with backup went towards the house... they sneeked up at the house and entered it knocking down the door.
-Everybody stay where u are.. POLICE! Ice yelled, her eyes searching the room... till she looked straight in eyes she knew, it couldnt be... he jumped up and ran away, leader of the gang... Jinx, pointing a gun at the police.. knocked him out wiv his free arm and he fell to the ground followed by the police who fired at them... Duncan and Chloe got hit, duncan in the arm, Chloe in the leg...

-oi please im not dead ya know? chloe said looking at the bunch of flowers at the window
-like guess who theire all from, Jake said rolling his eyes
-Chris, yeah I kno tis like soo aaaaaaaargh! she said rolling her eyes
-he likes ya...
-yeh but I dont like him, urgh! she said sitting up
-so howz u?
-im ok... this is the second time, do I have 'hit me' written all over my face or summat?
-well tis dunc's first time and he's acting like he's dying... poor fella
-aww, shall pay him a visit in a moment...
- u shure u gonna do that?
-I can walk! djeez whats up wiv everyone? she pushed herself of her bed and made her way to duncans ward, slowly that is...
-hey hun, chris said slapping her ass
-excuse me? she said her eyes wide open...
-I said hi...
-like u slapped my ass, thats no way u do that to a woman... U wanna kno what I do wiv men that do that?
-what?
-I um wouldnt ask that, jake said and hold in his laugh
-u still wanna have kids? she said grabbing his bits
-thats why, jake said and laughed
-ok ok, I he... feel where ur goin to now let go ...
-please?
-please...
-now just let me do my thing and dont.. just... jake?!
-yeh yeh, c'mon chris lets grab a drink...
-hey dunc, she said knocking in his door and made her way in.
-hey Chloe, he said and smiled faintly
-howz u?
-besides having a hole in my arm nothing serious, what u?
-hole in my leg but its fine, she said and laughed...
-glad we can see the joke in it? not?
-yes indeed, she said and smiled
+2 months later+
Chloe hadent really heard much of Ryder after she saw him wiv they gang... Jake had asked him some questions but after that he had disappeared...
-Im coming.. coming! Chloe yelled after someone knocked on her door, she dragged herself out of her bed, put on a tshirt and opened the door, What? she snapped
-hey, ryder said
-Oh... hey...
-can I come in?
-Yeh I guess...
-I um..; brought u some coffee...
-coffee? she asked and looked at him questioning
-im sorry to gate crash like this...
-thats ok I guess... only I haven heard of u in months! she said getting back in bed.
-I um...
-Ur doin drugs yeh I actually saw that... she snapped putting the coffee on the table next to her.
-Its not what u think it is...
-Ryder, its 3 in the night, she sighted... cant we like talk another time? im tired I wanna sleep...
-Chloe please...
-SLEEP, she said turning around and put the pillow over her head
-see you tomorrow then?
-Night ryder!
-bye, he said looked down and walked out.
-I cant believe him, who does he think he is? like dropping by after not hearing him in 2 months, she said and looked outside seeing him walkin in the rain...
-he brought me coffee...
-well thats sweet, jake said
-at 3 in the NIGHT! chloe sighted and sat down on her chair
-are u in a mood? duncan raised an eyebrown
-no I am not, im just wondering why he came by at
- 3 am yeh we know... jake said and laughed
-I havent heard of him in months and there he is...
-what u told him? to come bk today what u thought? have a convo when im dead tired... no thank u, she stood up, picked up a coat and threw it on dunc's desk.
-aww thx hun, I was searching for that! he replied and smiled
-ya welcome! whats goin on downstairs? she asked looking outside the window hearing people shout.
-I dunno, jake said walking out to the stairs.
-Cant u just watch where ur goin! Chris shouted
-I said I was sorry!
-Sorry yeh shure u are!
-Look what is ur flower!n problem?!
-u need to look out of ur eyes yeh?
-my eyes? the one u just punched and turns to all the colors of the rainbow?
-Oi now u little ...
-Chris! Chloe yelled, get off his bk will ya!
-ooh covering up for him are u now?
-thats not covering up! ur over reacting like always! What the... whats that black eye huh?
-he was in my way when me hand slipped...
-hell no, Chris Im telling u once, not twice, fkn try to deal wiv ur issues here ok?! djeez, Ryder u aight?
-yeh im ok...
-what u doin here? she asked
-I wanted to talk to you...
-were not finished here! chris yelled
-YES u are! chloe replied and walked wiv Ryder upstairs.
-Ryder... she said and sat down.
-Chloe before u start... I want to say im sorry...
-sorry for what? that I got shot in my leg thanks to you...
-I...
-what were u actually doin there? let me see ur eyes? u taking drugs?
-no im not... not enymore... im clean now...
-are u shure?!
-yeh! im not taking enymore!
-why didnt u tell me? did I actually pay ur drugs?
-Im sorry, he said and looked down
-I cant believe this! U lied to me, I thought I could trust u, I helped u and then u do that to me...
-Im sorry, I had no other choice... he wouldv killed me if I didnt pay him then...
-well he's in jail now so he cant do u nothing...
-I know...
-Ryder, why? what happened to you? why dont I kno enything about ur past?
-cuz that was the past... im Ryder, im 19 now and thats how it is...
-Ryder please...
-No I do not want to talk about this...
-ok... do u wanna go out? grab something to eat now? my shift's nearly over...
-yeh shure, ryder said, memories of the past flashing back up in his mind, fighting the tears, not wanting to think about it... He erased the past out of his mind, he cant think about it, and now its back...
-So u want chinese? if thats ok with you...
-everythings fine wiv me, Ryder replied and smiled
-ok, she said got her coat and threw chris an evil look.
-Oi oi watch the eyes babe!
-will u shut up!? Jake yelled and rolled his eyes, always got an answer on everything... EVERYTHING! he said to duncan.
-I know da feeling, he said and turned around to search something on the computer.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This was the sadest fic I've ever read Crying or Very sad it's so good but I think I can't review coz I'm afraid to spoil it Wink
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