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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:46 pm    Post subject: One Sweet Day. 2nd June 07.Chap.4 Up. Reply with quote
This is my first temp writing a fiction. 'One Sweet Day' is a song that I really love. It was sung by Boys2Men Ft. Mariah Carey. Commonts will be much appricated.

Michelle x

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One Sweet Day.(c) Michelle Stevens.

He didn't get a chance to tell her how much he cared for her, loved her. He left it too late. If he had the chance to go back in time and rewind this whole mess he wouldn't be standing here, looking down on his soul mate grave. A tear rolled down Lee's cheek as he closed his eyes. "If I didn't let you go then you will still be here" Lee whispered as he opened his eyes again. "We will remember Michelle Stevens as a beauitful, intelligent young lady, who cared for others around her. A lovely girlfriend, a sister and daughter." Lee couldn't take the tense any longer, he walked away to be on his own.

The coffin, that Michelle's body was in, started to get buried. "She will always be in our thoughts, in our hearts and you will not feel alone as she is with us in sprirts." Duncan looked behind him as he saw Lee sitting on a bench not that far from Michelle's grave. Duncan leaned to Simon and whispered something in his ear; Simon nodded as Duncan made his way to Lee. Duncan placed himself next to Lee, he put his arm around Lee's back and hugged him. "I didn't tell her Duncan, it's all my fault. I didn't tell her how much I cared for her, loved her. It was too late" Lee cried in between his words. "Hey, hey, hey Lee. It's not your fault ok. You didn't know that the lorry would crash into the car where Michelle was. It's the stupid drivers fault, he ran an red light." Lee shock his head. "No you don't understand, it's my fault" Duncan rubbed Lee's back. "Mate it's not." "It is. I was the one who decided that Michelle could go see Nadies, she needed to return her mobile, then came back and pick me up then both of us would go and get something to eat. She didn't come back though, didn't she Duncan?" Duncan shock his head. "The last time I got to see Michelle was at your house, when you invited both me and Michelle for a drink. It's all my fault. I shouldn't have let Chelle drive up to Nadies house on her own." Duncan didn't know what to do or say. "Mate, the lads and me will help you. We will be there for you. Michelle is still with us; she is in your thoughts and your heart. You will get through this. I promise."

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*cuddles Leelee*

Poor thing. Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Funerals, hate them Neutral

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
OMG!!! such a sad start Crying or Very sad
but brillantly writen i cant wait to read more
this looks like its going to be a very interesting fic Laughing
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laughing Thankyou girlies. I wrote this fiction on Microsoft Word. More to come very soon.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Oh dear. I hate funerals. I've been to one 3 weeks ago. Sad

I love the start. More when you can pleaase! Razz

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
^^ You wish is my command. I dunno about this add, to me I don't really like it.

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[Flash Back]
"Lee you really want to go out for dinner, cause I know you want to keep low with the whole boy band thing. I understand if you want to stay home and have dinner?" Michelle said as she got into Lee's car. "No way babe. I'm taking you out and that's final missy." Lee smiled, as they both kissed inside the car. "Right here we go, go go." Lee said, as Michelle laughed. He started the car and drove off. "Oh is it ok if we could pop down Nadies house, she left something at our house when she stayed over, and I thought I should give it back to her." Lee nodded. "Cause babe, what is it though anyways? Her shoes? jacket?" "Her mobile. She left it behind by mistake and I kept on saying to myself that I should give it back to her but didn't have the time to do so." Lee nodded. "That's ok. That Nadies of yours always forget things when she comes over to our house." Michelle gave a little laugh. "I don't blame her, half of my things have disappeared cause you've brought a big house." Lee looked at Michelle. "Excuse me we both brought that house together, anyways speaking of going by our friends houses, need to go to Duncan's need to tell him something, so is that ok if we could drop by Duncan's frist then to Nadies then dinner?" Michelle nodded as she looked out of the window. "Yeah that's ok with me. We could go to Duncan's for a bit." Lee smiled. "Cheers babe." Lee drove to Duncan's house. They listened to some music and talked to each other, until they arrived at Duncan's house.

Lee undid his seat belt and looked at Michelle. "I won't be long I promise." Lee smiled to Chelle as he gave her a kiss. Getting out of the car and slamming the door shut. He made his way towords Duncan's front door. Lee pressed the doorbell and waited for Duncan to answer. "Hey mate, took your time." Lee said, as he gave a little laugh. "Alright, what you doing here?" Duncan was standing in front of his door. "Well Michelle and I was planning to go out for dinner, but then Michelle needed to go to Nadies so she could give back her mobile. Then I thought I come over and talk to you about something." Lee then gave Duncan the wink as Duncan nodded. Duncan knew that Lee was going to propose to Michelle. "Oh ok, that thing. Why don't you leave that for a second and ask Michelle to come in for a drink?" Lee thought about it then nodded. "Yeah that would be nice, hold on while I get her." Lee ran to his car, where Michelle was sitting waiting for Lee to take her to Nadies place. "Hey babe, you want to come in Duncan's house for a bit?" Michelle looked at the time. "Well I would, but I really needed to get back Nads mobile. She can't go anywhere without it, and I rang her house phone and she's waiting for her mobile." Lee nodded. "Ok, why don't you take the car and drive to Nads place, bring her mobile to her then come back, get me then we could both go to dinner?" Michelle nodded, as she got out of the car and walked around it, grabbing the keys out of Lee's hands. "Thanks babe." Michelle said as she kissed Lee. "Be careful ok?" Michelle got in the car and started the engine up. "Love you." Michelle said, as Lee bend down. "Love you more. Be careful." Michelle smiled. "I will don't you worry." Lee kissed Michelle again as he got up and watched Michelle drive off. Lee ran up the path to Duncan. "Michelle is going to take Nads mobile back then coming back to get me." Duncan nodded, as Lee stepped into Duncan's house.

"And I know you're shining down on me from heaven." Michelle started to sing both hers and Lee's favourite song. She looked up at the sky and saw that the clouds were getting dark. "Aww now it's going to rain." Michelle said to herself as she continued to drive. Michelle was getting close to the traffic lights, for a second she speeded up the car. "Don't change whatever you do." Michelle said to herself as she saw the lights about to change colour. "Don't change to red." Michelle whispred to herself as she speeded up the car even faster. The lights changed to yellow, then to red. Michelle drove passed the yellows lights, just when it turned red. "I did it, I did it." Michelle said to herself as she looked to the side of her. "Stop!" Michelle screamed as she pressed the breaks down hard. The car was spinning out of control. Michelle tried to control the wheel but she couldn't. In front of her was a lorry driving fast, breaking the limit of the speed. "Stop!" Michelle shouted, but soon everything turned to black. Everything went..quite.

'Sorry, I never told you, all I wanted to say'

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
They're so cuuuute together. Surprised

Damn you for killing her. Mrs Neutral
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laughing

I'm not a murder.

The driver is.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You're the writer. Mrs Neutral
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Shocked

Crying or Very sad

Loving this fic so far

and loooove that song,
it always make me cry Neutral

Moreee soooon Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Nads. wrote:
You're the writer. Mrs Neutral

Well...er.....

Ok, you got me speachless there.

Will add now for you lovely people.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 11:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ha. I'm so good. Cool
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 11:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lee got up as he looked at Duncan. "I want to be alone with Michelle for a bit." Duncan got up and looked at Lee. "You sure, you sure you want to be alone? I could come and stay with you while you talk to Michelle?" Lee shock his head. "No please, I want to be on my own." Duncan nodded, as he made his way to Antony and Simon. Lee made his way to Michelle's grave. Slowly, as he reached the gravestone touching the letters of Michelle's name. "Hey babe. You know I love you" Lee began to say, as he sat down in front of Michelle's coffin, which was buried with dust and mud. "I never got to say that I loved you, when you went away from me. I did, but I wanted to say it to you when you got back. Why did you do that? Speed up the car and drove just when the lights hit red? Didn't you think for a second? Why did you have to go? Why did you have to do this to me? Leave me alone. I needed you, you knew that. I needed you to take care of me, keep me down to earth. I can't be myself if you're not here. I love you Michelle, my baby Chelle. I didn't want to lose you, you were my rock. My soul mate." Lee began to cry. "Why did you go?"

"I still remember the night when I had that phone call. I rushed to the hospital just to see if you were ok? I still remember it." Lee said, as he closed his eyes and thought back to what happened.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 12:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Sad Sad Poor baby!

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