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Nico UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:05 pm Post subject: The Gift - Chapter 5. |
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Hello all! Herewith my new fiction. Have to admit that I got inspiration from the book of 'Where Rainbow Ends' by Cecelia ahern. I love the writing style, it's cute. I wrote 'The Gift' is just for fun, nothing serious.
Hope you like it, Nico xxxx.
* The Gift *
Chapter 1
You have 1 unread message from LeeLee
‘Damn! Im on the way to skool, dun let Miss Ginny nos that Im l8, love Lee x’
‘Lee u cheeky sod, where were u last nite? No I won’t tell Miss Ginny dat u r l8 if only u treat me a lunch lmao c u, Ki x’
‘Ms Ginny’s 40’s isn’t she? But she looks older than my granny! GUESS WOT! I stayed over nite at Ella’s Hahahaha *is happy* Lee x’
‘Hello! D u get my txt Ki?’
‘Yea I did but I was 2 focusing on wot Granny Ginny says. Ella the bitch? wot am I supposed to say? Oh okay.’
‘She isn’t bitch, I like her, ur Lee x.’
‘Ok, u like bitch, that’s why she’s lots of commons wit u, ur innocent Ki x’
‘What’s problem wit u? Are you having period? Bleeding like fountain and got bad pain in ur back dat makes you lost temper? Whahahaha! Lee x’
‘Shut up! I’m fine, the problem I have is because u distracted me by texting all da time, Ki x.’
‘I juz got on bus, I’ll c u @ skool soon, rememba dun let granny ginny nos am not dere, big Lee x’
‘Oh look! Granny Ginny wears a short skirt 2day, can u imagine how ur granny looks like when she’s in shortie, showing off her
WARNING LETTER:
Dear Mr and Mrs Lam,
I was wondering can we arrange a meeting with you to discuss Kiki’s recent behaviour in school and her texting during class, how about next Monday at 3:30 pm?
Miss Ginny
You have an instant message from - || Kiko || *is pissed off*
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: LEEEEE!!! How could she take away my cell?!?! But granny said that she would return to mum when they meet personal at school, but then again, do you think she is really planning on giving it back to me???
I wish I had a big willy: Of course she will, your cell is too old and worn out. If she really doesn’t return you, then you will have a nice excuse for your parents to get you new one, Granny Ginny does you a favour.
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: Well, you got a point there.
I wish I had a big willy: Fancy watching movie? I bought two tickets for this Saturday maybe we can go to cinema together.
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: Right... Ella the bitch can’t go out with you.
I wish I had a big willy: Nah, what made you think like that?
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: When she can’t stick with you and when you bought tickets for two which can’t be refunded, you just end up coming to ask me out for paying another half of the tickets, thank you very much!
I wish I had a big willy: It’s not like that. I really wanna go out with you. Look, you’re the first one I called up and asked.
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: Because you have on one to ask.
I wish I had a big willy: Well...
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: I’m not allowed to go out until mum meets up Granny Ginny, poor me Lee. *cries*
I wish I had a big willy: Oh that’s pity, we could have messed around this Saturday like old times, we haven’t gone out together for a long while.
|| Kiko || *is pissed off*: YESSS since you started dating with Ella! Oh shit, mum is coming up, gotta go xxx
I wish I had a big willy: See ya later xxx.
|| Kiko || *is pissed off* has logged off.
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Nadsie. Prima Donna
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:11 pm Post subject: |
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I looove that book by Cecelia Ahern. It's funny.
Lmao at Lee's screenname "I wish I had a big willy."
More soon.  _________________
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mona* UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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LMAO that totally made me laugh spesh Lee's screename! *giggles*
Can't wait for more. x _________________
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Marz. Postaholic

Joined: 21 Jun 2006 Posts: 23641 Location: We Love You, Liverpool, We Do.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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I wish Lee had a big willy too
Looooved it  _________________
 
Laura & Marissa. Des amies. Very terrif.
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Nico UBNewbie

Joined: 23 Nov 2006 Posts: 176
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:02 pm Post subject: |
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LMAO Marz.
THANK YOU SO MUCH Mona, Nads and someone-who-wish-Lee-had-a-willy-too.
Anyone wants a bit of new chapter?  _________________ Please click my sign for checking out my fiction webpage, thanks!
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Nadsie. Prima Donna
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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I doooo.  _________________
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Marz. Postaholic

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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And meeeeeeeeee  _________________
 
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mona* UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: |
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Me Me Me Meeee! *jumps* _________________
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Nico UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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There you go
Chapter 2
You have an instant message from: - I wish I had a big willy.
I wish I had a big willy: Are you there Ki?
|| Kiki ||: Don’t rush me, I’m getting in my jeans now, see you at Sogo yeah? I can’t can’t can’t wait to see ‘Spice World’, the movie must be fab!
I wish I had a big willy: Erm... well... Ella just called me.
|| Kiki ||: Don’t tell me she’s free now and YOU’re planning on going out with her instead of me?
I wish I had a big willy: Erm...
I wish I had a big willy: Hello??
I wish I had a big willy: Are you mad at me? I’m sorry.
I wish I had a big willy: I’m so so so sorry, please forgive me just once, you know she’s my girlfriend.
|| Kiki ||: HELLO?! I’m your best friend for Christ’s sake, okay maybe you found someone special in your life, maybe you need her more than me now, but it doesn’t mean you have to distant yourself from me, it doesn’t mean you’re going to stop talking with your friends!! You’ll never know how you disappointed me Lee!
I wish I had a big willy: I -
|| Kiki || has logged off.
Dear Nicky,
How are you? We haven’t talked for ages since last time we headed down to Causeway Bay. I miss you so much. Jeez I hope we can go to the same secondary school together. How have you been up to at school? Mine is going well (apart from Granny Ginny attempted on stealing my cell but Lee got a great point there, what if she steals it, I then have to ask mummy for getting me brand new one)
Speaking of Lee, have I ever mentioned you about a girl called Ella? You’re right, Lee fancies her and they started darting now. In a way, for god’s sake, I should be happy for him, shouldn’t I? but I don’t feel happy at all, I know I’m a bit selfish here, maybe the fact that I feel like I’m not his best friend anymore. We used to stick to each other everyday, every weekend. It feels so odds we stopped running the routine. I don’t like Ella. She makes me feel like she is some other silly girl who stole my best friend away, just like we didn’t like Jessica at our primary school when she tried to take you away from me. You didn’t like Pamela either as she tried to make us fall out, gossiping all about your bad point to me (deep down, I clearly knew what she was going to say) you hated her. I kind of remember you shoved some wet tissue in her bag in Art class, which leaving colorful trails over all of her books, she screamed and cried as she spot of the disgusting thingy in the bag. Bless her. Anyways I’ve gotta go, please write back soon, we sooooo need to catch up with each other.
Miss you!
Your best friend,
Kiki.
Dear Kiki,
I would like to apologise for hurting your feelings the other day, I didn’t mean to, I’m sorry. You’re my best friend and always will be, this is the fact will never ever change and none will be able to replace you. When will you stop to torture me by ignoring me at school? I feel like a zombie in past few days as you stopped talking to me, you weren’t around and I got nobody to talk with. I don’t think Ella likes talking to me at school, she told me she just doesn’t like it, I can’t figure out why. We fought over it last night, I don’t understand her sometimes, she drives me nut!
I automatically picked up the phone and dialed your number, your face popped up in my mind when I need someone to talk to when I’m feeling down. But I quickly hung it up, I’m not sure if you’re ready for speaking to me again. I realised you're so important to me Kiki. As you see, I enclosed you an apology card, it’s Mcdull’s, he looks just so like you, ha! Ha! I hope you like it, please call me back soon.
Loads of love
Your best friend always and forever,
Lee xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
You have an instant message from: - Spiderman.
Spiderman: You look great today.
Kiki: Lee?! Aww thank you, that’s so sweet of you! I hope you mean it cos you never complimented me, well... is the compliments a part of apologising??
Spiderman: I mean it you look gorgeous today.
Kiki: Do I just look gorgeous ‘TODAY’?? I thought everyday!
Spiderman: Haha you’re so cute, yeah you’re gorgeous everyday. Oh Kiki, I hate to say that but, I’ve gotta go, speak to you soon.
Kiki: yeah you better off, Granny Ginny is staring at me cos all the teacher's pets started working on assignment now and I have to do mine. Oh wait wait, I wanted to say thank you for sending me apology card, it’s lovely, but please remember - I’m nothing like Mcdull > <
Spiderman has logged off.
You have an instant message from: - Lee
Lee: KIKI!
Kiki: Why did you bother to change your username and log in again?
Lee: What?
Kiki: Do I really look great today? *Takes out her mirror and have a look at self*
Lee: ..............
Kiki: LEE!!
Lee: What?
Kiki: Hehe I’m gorgeous with my new pink top eh?
Lee: Save it! Go away and show off your flirty skill to other lads but me!
Kiki: Very funny, who flirted who in the first place? You just sent me a message saying that I look great and gorgeous today! You love me haha! Admit it!
Lee: WHAT?!?!?!!!? Have I ever said that? Well, erm, sorry to burst your bubble, I never said that, never in millions years.
Kiki: Are you serious? Your screen name was ‘Spiderman’.
Lee: Hahahaha funny name but I’d rather name myself as Batman. No! It’s not me.
Kiki: Who the hell he is????????????? _________________ Please click my sign for checking out my fiction webpage, thanks!
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mona* UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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I start lovin that...
Mwahaha@LeeLee!
Moooore! x _________________
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Marz. Postaholic

Joined: 21 Jun 2006 Posts: 23641 Location: We Love You, Liverpool, We Do.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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I bet it was that Ellachick
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Nadsie. Prima Donna
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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Batman.  _________________
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Nico UBNewbie

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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:41 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 3
You have an instant message from: Nicky.
Nicky: Are you okay? *hugs* I’ve read your email.
Kiki: Thankfully I’m still alive, thank you.
Nicky: LMAO! Good! Well, seriously... Forget him.
Kiki: Who? I don’t know who you are talking about.
Nicky: L – E – E! Lee! You know what I’m on about.
Kiki: Why forget him? He’s my best friend and always will be.
Nicky: Good then if only you just consider him as a best friend, no more than that.
Kiki: He sent me an apology card with Mcdull, Lee’s so sweet and lovely.
Nicky: How “lovely” and “sweet” he is when he decided to abandon you for the bitch last Saturday and plus it’s just an apology card, not love letter, you don’t have to be self-intoxicated.
Kiki: I don’t!
Nicky: Good! I didn’t mean to be harsh, I just want to take the mickey out of you and I don’t wanna see you get hurt ultimately or maybe you should try to get to know Ella, Lee will be more than happy.
Kiki: Hello? Are you my friend? No way am I going to talk to her. Well actually I don’t think she likes me too, she never gives me a tiny private chat with Lee, she just follows us like a dog. The bitch totally gets on my nerves.
Nicky: But then again, Lee still loves her even she looks like a dog, right? Everyone in your school clearly know she’s a right slut, but why does Lee only see her? Maybe that’s what we call “True Love”.
Kiki: Never knew you could be sophisticated.
Nicky: Ha! It’s real me.
Kiki: ZZZZZzzzzzzzz
Happy 16th Darling!
Wish you all the best! We placed you $ 100 on your nightstand. Take it and buy something you like.
Love you always,
Mummy and Daddy.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY KIKO!
You’re 16 years now! You old cake! Ha! Ha!
Let’s have fun! Neway Karaoke, here we come!!!
Love your young and cute 15 years old friend,
Nicky xxx.
For my best friend
Happy 16th sweetheart!
You’re getting older and older! He! He! Where are you going to celebrate for your sweet age? I’m sorry Kiki, I would have so much lovee been there for your fantastic b-day, pity! Ella made me a big surprise, she booked us tickets. Guess what, we are heading to Lantau Island!!!!! Awwww! This is the place where you and I have always wanted to go to. Do you remember we have always talked about what we should take and then run away from home just one night (When we have a row with our parents) just the two of us on the lovely island, it would be amazing! We even imagined that how to set up a tent in order to sleep inside comfy under the starry night. Can you believe it I’m going to there NOW!! It’s so exciting! Right, I’ve gotta stuff up my bags, see you later. Have fun at your party.
P.S. I’ll get you some smelly fish from Lantau Island. Ha! Ha!
P.P.S. Ella said hello and happy birthday to you. Told you Ki, she’s a lovely girl, you should make some time to get to know her, I’m sure you two will be good friends.
Friend Forever,
Lee xxxxxxxxxxxxx.
From: Nicky
To: Kiko
Subject: Where are you?
Hello Kiki,
Haven’t heard from you for ages since your 16th party, I wondered if you are okay? I’m sorry for dropping you at doorstep of you home and then left in quick but I couldn’t bear with the smell that you puked over my new Gucci top.
You know what, the bill for Karaoke was awful, I lost count on how many bottle of beer you drunk. Do you still remember you threw up on a girl’s cleavage?? When you said you wanted to check up if her boobs are real? (The one who has Jordan’s size’s tits. She is your schoolmate I reckon) She looked very angry, well don’t mind her, I think the girls are cheering up for you for doing the huge favour for them. Please write back soon, let me know how you have been up to. I’m worried about you, Kiko you NEVER drank! But you did awful lots on your birthday. Maybe it’s good thing though, at least you finally know what the differences between with piss and beer are...
Loads of Love,
Nicky xxx _________________ Please click my sign for checking out my fiction webpage, thanks!
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Marz. Postaholic

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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:24 am Post subject: |
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Told ya Ellabitch
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Nadsie. Prima Donna
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 9:00 am Post subject: |
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Stupid Ella.  _________________
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