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Nico
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 Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 5:56 am Post subject: Eternal Snowflakes - Chapter 3. {FINISHED} |
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Hi all,
It's me again, yeah I'm back with a fic.  Actually I feel a bit weird to be here since I haven't been Duncan forum nor any Blue board in ages. But it's really good to see all of my old BB mates 
Anyway, I would like to post up my new fic here. The fic is very short, it's gonna be 3 or 4 chapters something like that. I make it completed on last year but never showed it up before. Ok, time to shut now  I hope you will like it.
Nicky xxx.
Eternal Snowflakes.
{Chapter 1}
The door cracked open and I stepped out of my car, marching towards the way I was to be supposed there now. Buttoned up my coat I tightened my brown Burberry scarf around my neck and shuffled with my legs on the busy street in London.
I was reeled slightly as people brushing off my shoulder when they passed by quickly. Of course, everyone was in rush, to be home for celebrating Christmas with their family or friends.
Candy snowflakes fell from the dark sky, gracefully dancing in the cold air and touching my nose. It sent shiver with chill down my spine. However, I could feel nothing but lonely and cold.
Lonely and cold.
I placed my hand on my jeans pocket as something vibrating inside. Pulled it out rapidly I slammed my thumb on the button.
“Hello?” I said as crisp as I could.
“Where are you? Can you be any slower mate?” Duncan exclaimed sarcastically on the phone. Smile crept upon my face.
“Ah give me 5 minutes.” I checked up the time on my watch.
“You said the same thing like one hour ago, look where you are now, but I’m not surprised really, you’re just predictable Lee Ryan!” he teased me.
“Oh shut up!” I moaned, making him laugh. As the line went dead, I raised my heavy legs on the path to Chinawhite’s. The club, last Christmas, the club… suddenly a clip of memories flooded back and knocked on my brain asking for coming in. I thought I could bury them in the depth forever, but obviously they came alive again and that hurts.
To Be Continued.
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Tabea
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Awh hiya Nicky!  Haven't talked to ya for ages! 
Loving this! xxx
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mona*
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 9:44 am Post subject: |
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Weee Nicky! You're back!
I really really love it so far! Can't wait for more!
Love, Mona x
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 10:14 am Post subject: |
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Woah Nicky you're back
I do not know you but you're back
Looooved the start
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Nadsie.
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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Woooo you're back!!
And with a new fic. Lovely start, cannot wait for more.
xxx Nads.
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*sing with westlife* She's back again... she's back ...
hey glad to know you have new fic!!!!!!!!!
lee is always late, isn't he? but it's strange that dunk is SO punctual! oh oh, the sun will be raised up from the west!! lol
can't wait for more, nico!!!! wanna know what/who made lee so sad...
is... that... you???? 
btw, this chap is too short... esp it's written by you! lol
love,
kiko xx
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Nico
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Thanks for your lovely reviews girls!
Tabea - thanks for the review, thanks for reading and thanks for still remembering me.  lmao.
Mona - Thanks
Marz - what's your name. maybe we have ever talked before in BB forum.
Moose - thanks 
Kiko - *runs away cos she sings*
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Nico
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Chapter 2
Who wants a dirty chapter? 
Leave your message here and I'll PM you.
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Dirty chapter? Oooh yes please! x
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it's Marissa I don't remember you, so don't think we ever talked
But errr dirrrty chapter
It's about time for my arrival
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Oh loving the start A dirty chapter? Lool I'm up for it
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Meeeeeeeee wants the PM please! x
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Moooi! *waves*
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| Moose wrote: | | Dirty chapter? Oooh yes please! x |
Wow, sent it out.
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| - Marz - wrote: | it's Marissa I don't remember you, so don't think we ever talked
But errr dirrrty chapter
It's about time for my arrival |
I think I've seen your name somewhere on BB. Maybe on fanfic fourm, well... seem like. 
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