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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:47 pm    Post subject: Obviously!! added 15/01 Reply with quote
Hey guys this is my new fic.
Hope you like it. Ive got quite a bit written for it soi should be adding regularly! So heres a long add to get started
please r&r

Obviously
*Flashback*

‘Argh Danny’ Jo screamed as she ran away from the young dark haired boy. He had been chasing her around the large green area for the last five minutes, and were both becoming short of breath ‘Lee save me’ grabbing the older boy round the waist Jo span herself round so that he was stood in front her; stopping Danny from getting to her
‘Don’t get me involved’ he laughed as he prised her arms from around him going to sit with Deb, as they laughed watching Jo run off as Danny came after her.
Finally he caught up with Jo grabbing her round the waist tickling her sides frantically, knowing that this was the worse place for her to be tickled
‘Argh Danny Stop’ she giggled, now lying on the ground, trying to wiggle out of his grip
‘So you surrender?’ he smirked clamping her arms by her sides. Frantically Jo shook her head still smiling ‘Well in the case’ he started tickling her again making her cry out
‘Okay, Okay I surrender’ she struggled to say through laughter. Grinning broadly Danny got up off her then helped her up before walking back over to the other two
‘Eww guys please, we don’t wanna see that’ Danny moaned as they sat down seeing the other two with their tongues down each others throats. Reluctantly they pulled away, Lee grinned cheekily
‘Your just jealous mate’
‘No not really. That is my sister after all’ he replied while screwing up his face making the other three laugh.
‘Whose house we at tonight then? Yours or Ours?’ Deb asked
‘Ours, we were at yours last week’ Jo replied standing up ‘come on Lee, we gotta go set some stuff ready’ she added as she gave Danny and Deb a hug
‘Oh yeh. Were see you round ours at half 7’ he said more then asked but still received nods from the others. Kissing Deb gently, and then doing their special handshake with Danny he ran to catch up wiv Jo and the two of them walked off.

*End Flashback*


Wiping the tears that had formed in her eyes Jo put the photo to one side before looking through the boxful of photos s
he had of the four of them. They used to be the good old days. But that was all over, she had a new life now, and unfortunately two of them weren’t part of it. They had lost two of their best friends, which brought more tears to her eyes, seeing the fun times they used to spend together. If you ever found one of them you could guarantee that the other 3 wouldn’t be that far behind.

Putting down that box, she picked up another one picking out the best ones, this time smiling at the people seen in the picture. The people in these pictures were her life now, had been for the past 4 years. The picture showed her in the middle of four boys, one she loved more then anything and always would while the other three she had just met, but had come to love in her own way.

*Flashback*

‘Lee’ Jo moaned as he dragged her up the hall ‘Why did I have to come?’
‘Because you love me’ he ginned before grabbing her hand making her run to keep up wiv him
‘No seriously y?’
‘Watch it you. And I want you to meet the boys before we go on, and I want you to see me perform’ Jo went to open her mouth but Lee cut her off ‘and don’t say you have heard me sing before this is totally different. I’m performing on tele Jos’
‘I know Lee ive always said you could make it’ she smiled up at the older boy, squealing as he suddenly lifted her up spinning her round
‘I gonna be on tele, can you believe it’.
He put her down grabbing her hand and carried on walking. They pasted a couple more doors all with celebrities’ names on them, before reaching a door with ‘BLUE’ written on it. Knocking on it twice Lee pushed the door open and bounced in.
‘You alright guys?’ he shouted giving them all hugs ‘I’d like you to meet Jo’ he added turning round, but found she weren’t there, frowning he headed towards the door and started laughing as he found her standing the other side of it ‘What ya doing out here?’
‘Well you left me out here, seemed rude just to walk in’ she replied shyly, before feeling herself being pulled through the door
‘Guys meet Jo, Jo meet the guys’ Lee said as he pushed her forward. Raising her head she was met with three young blokes, all good looking in there own right though there was one that caught Jo’s eye the most.
‘Hi that’s Simon, Antony and im Duncan’ one of the guys stepped forward giving her a light hug and a kiss on the cheek ‘We’ve heard a lot about you’ she felt her cheeks redden
‘All good I hope’ she asked cheekily glancing at Lee who was giving her a knowing smile
‘Of course he don’t have a bad word to say about ya’ Dunk winked

‘Guys are you ready, you’re on in five’ a voice bellowed before a bald headed guy walked through the door ‘I take it this lovely lady is with you Lee. Hi im their tour manager Johnny’ he voice softened and he smiled slightly
‘Hey! Why you just assume she’s with me?’ Lee pretended to sulk folding his arms across his chest
‘Because you asked me if you could bring your sister along in the meeting the other day’ he stated matter of factly, the other guys laughing at Lee’s stupidity
‘Ahh shut it guys’ he said as he started to laugh along
‘Being your first performance can I have a picture with you four’ Jo asked still quite shy, receiving a round of yes’s, before being bundled on. She was in the middle with Lee and Duncan with Simon and Antony next to them.
‘Right come on them guys’ Johnny shouted pushing the guys out of the door one by one, before giving Jo a pass and leading her to the side of the stage where the boys were huddled, before being called on the stage.

*End Flashback*


That day had changed her life, she got to see her brother do what he did best and she could tell he loved every minute of it; she was welcomed into the Blue family and made three extra mates that did everything they could to protect her in the four years they had known each other. The only bad point was that in that four year she lost her two best friends along the way. A year into Lee being in Blue Danny and Deb’s dad had got a new job and they had to move back up to Bolton, they had all tried staying in contact but in the end it just fizzled out. They haven’t spoken to each other for 3 years now.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Oooo, great start. I love it already Mr. Green
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
lol thank you Very Happy
ill add more when i get more reviews
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like this start. Very Happy

Will be reading this.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
fanks nads
hope u like the rest of it too lol
shall post more soon
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
ooo jo i never told me u ad a new fic going!!!
fantastic start hun! cant wait to c were it goes
More sooooooonnn
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
sozzie hun! im bad i no lol
think its going better then my other one lol
fank u! u shall find out soon
shall add more when i get a least one more review

luving the new siggie aswell
was wicked - well myn was all i can say for urs is the txt msg lol

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
as always i'm the last one to know everything *sighs dramatically* Razz
i love it...altho i'm sencing this is more McFly fic...but i also believe i'm gonna be reading this lol...cuz I LOVE IT Mr. Green Mr. Green
add soonies cuz i wanna see whats the whole deal:p
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
sorrie mon
and if it makes u feel any better no1 new i had this fic up my sleeve
i just thought id be brave n go for it lol
hope u do read it... coz ur in it lol
and its a bit of both

and as promised i will add some more
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
i'm in it? Shocked
damn...u better make me look hot!!!!!
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
here we go then
hope u like it... its another long one as i didnt know where to cut it

Reaching into the box Jo picked out the rest of her photo albums, ready to sort out and change the pictures when she felt something cold on her hand. Looking into the box she pulled out a silver charm bracelet with all her charms on it. On each individual charm there was the name of the other three, they all had one the two girls having charm bracelets the boys just have normal ones. Danny, Deb and Jo first brought one for Lee for his 16th birthday, and had decided to continue the tradition. Smiling she put it on her wrist and did up the clasp before looking back through the box.
‘What ya doing’ came a voice making Jo jump and spin round, seeing Lee in the doorway
‘God Lee, why do you always do that?’
‘Sorry chick, didn’t mean to make ya jump’ he said as he sat on the floor next to her ‘but what are all these?’ he added picking up one of the photos laying on her floor
‘Well I was just unpacking, and I found all these, and I was just looking through all the pictures’ she said looking through the ones from the Blue tour last year ‘and look what I found’
‘I remember when we gave you this’ Lee grinned ‘was one of the last times they came down weren’t it?’ he asked silently playing with the charms on Jo’s bracelet
‘Yeh, think that was the last time we saw them’ she replied signing slightly ‘do you still miss them?’
‘Of course I do, they were my best mates for like 15 years’
‘Yeh they were good ones those two’ they sat there in silence for a while going through the old photos laughing at the memories they all shared together. Jo picked up the next bunch of photos, and her smile grew even bigger, the reason how she had got over the last couple of years, the person who had made her so happy, and who had been portrayed so wrong.

~
*Flashback*

Everything had gone black, Jo couldn’t see a thing, all she could her was the giggles of her brother who was standing behind her, doing the stupid blindfold up.
‘Lee why do I need a blindfold on?’ Jo asked, she had been moaning about it every since he told her what he was doing
‘Because you aint allowed to see what’s going on, once we step out of the car’ she could tell he was grinning,
‘Still not fair, your mess my hair up’
‘Oh shush you, your luv it once you know what’s happening’ she felt him move, then felt someone grab her hand pulling her forwards making her slide across the seat, and get out of the car. She was directed along a path, trusting that Lee wouldn’t make her walk into anything when he suddenly stopped, Jo could hear him talking quietly, then the blindfold was removed, but she still couldn’t see anything.
‘SURPRISE’ she heard masses of voices around her, as her eyes adjusted to the sudden light. They were in a hall which had been decorated with balloon and banners. There was a DJ at the back of the room, and food lay out at the side. Jo could see all her guests some people she recognised, some she hadn’t see for years. But the most important people stood in front of her. Her mum, who had attached herself to lee and them both grinning at her, Johnny and his wife, Antony, Simon and Duncan; she was just about to go over to them when she felt a tap on her shoulder. Turning round she was met with two people she hadn’t seen for a while, causing her too scream
‘Oh my god, what are you guys doing here?’ she shouted as she switched from hugging Deb to hug Danny
‘Couldn’t miss a good party now could we babe?’ Danny replied cheekily
‘Thanks Danny, nice to know I’m loved’ she playfully pouted, before being shoved in the direction of the others, after the hellos and hugs Jo and Deb went out to dance, dragging the boys with them, like old times.

They had been dancing for a while but guys all started to head towards the bar for a drink, which just left Deb and Jo together with a few people dancing around them. She felt someone lightly place there hands on her hips, before hearing a voice in her ear
‘Can I talk to you?’ frowning slightly she nodded. Not knowing what he wanted that couldn’t wait. He led her to the back of the club where it was quite, and stood facing her. She looked up into his blue eyes waiting for him to speak
‘Er well…. I just need to say something ok?’ pausing he waited for her to say something but she just nodded ‘Well ive wanted to tell you this for a while… but i never had the courage until now. Well your brother kind of shoved me over’ he grinned making Jo laugh, that sounded like Lee
‘What was that then?’ she asked gently
‘Well if you would like to come out with me sometime?’ he asked. Jo stood there frozen to the spot speechless. He liked her? Since she first met him she had liked him, and they were so close, if Lee was never around she would always turn to Duncan he was just like another brother, and she had learnt to deal with her crush, she never thought he would fell the same
‘Y-you like me?’ she stuttered, coming out as more of a whisper
‘Yeh have for a while now, but Lee being Lee was being protective, but said now you’re 16 you can look after yourself’ he smiled’
‘Jeez well that’s so nice of him’ she replied rolling her eyes, Lee could be too protective of her sometimes, he didn’t know about some of the stuff she had done, that’s was another reason Duncan was there
‘And he made me promise not to hurt you, which I have no intention on doing’ he smiled as she smiled back ‘so what you say?’
‘Yeh ok then. You can show me how you treat ladies on a date’ she grinned. Duncan laughed softly before bending his head placing his lips gently on hers, before pulling away again. Grabbing her he pulled her back over to the others to tell them the news, which lead Jo’s mum into wanting a picture of the new couple.

*End Flashback*


‘I still cant believe you and Dunk have been together for nearly two years’ Lee said as they were coming to the end of the photos
‘Yeah I no it’s a scary thought. Were you really okay with it?’ Lee had never said anything when they fist started dating
‘Well I’ll admit its weird, but I could tell he made you happy and that’s what’s important’ he smiled
‘Aw Lee’ getting up on her knees she crawled over to him hugging him tightly, she didn’t know what she would do without him sometimes
‘Plus if he hurt you, I’d just been the crap out of him’ he added making Jo hit his chest before they both laughed.

They heard the front door open, before being closed again then a voice booming up the stairs
‘You guys up there?’ grinning Jo got up off the floor and made her way to the door, with Lee close behind her
‘Just coming mate’ he said as they reached the stairs. Running the rest of the way down them, Jo got to the bottom before jumping into Duncan’s arms kissing him hard.
‘Guys please’ Lee said before walking into the kitchen
‘Hey baby’ Duncan said once they had pulled away
‘Hey yourself’ Jo giggled moving out of him arms pulling him into the living room
‘You all unpacked?’ pulling Jo into his arms they snuggled into the sofa
‘No! Aint even started on the clothes’ Jo laughed ‘Have been looking through all my pictures’
‘Your have to show me them, there any embarrassing ones?
‘Yeh mate, the ones from tour last year, they were pretty bad’ Lee said as he came into the living room with three drinks. Putting them down on the table, he went and sat on the other sofa.
‘Oh god! I dread to think’ Duncan laughed
‘And there are lots from when we first met, and our childhood’
‘They are ones I definitely want to see, never miss a chance to look at you two growing up’ Dunk teased.
‘Well they’re a lot prettier then yours’ Lee teased back, making Jo laugh. Duncan pulled a shocked face, and then sat there pouting which made Lee and Jo laugh harder
‘Aw he’s only joking babe’ Jo said leaning across kissing him feeling him smile underneath her ‘You wanna help me finish unpacking?’
‘Yeh alright then’ he replied standing up, pulling Jo up with him
‘I’m gonna head to mums for a bit, ill bring a Chinese with me on my way back’ Lee said as he headed towards the door. Jo and Duncan said bye before making their way upstairs, to try and turn Lee’s spare room into Jo new bedroom.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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i'm in it? Shocked
damn...u better make me look hot!!!!!
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yeh course u are lol
and dont worry... u look just fine lol
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
‘Still not fair, your mess my hair up’ PMSL so u Jo!

and i look just fine? Mrs Neutral rudness...i'm suppose to look better than fine Mrs Neutral
Razz
awwww u and Dunkie...why do i have the felling that he is gonna get hurt in the end?! Mrs Neutral
love it hun...as always
KIC xxxx
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:14 pm    Post subject: Obviously!! 2nd add 24/9 Reply with quote
hehe i thought that line was quite good lol
ok u look fabulous and ***** thinks it too!
hehe me and dunk r sweet aint we?
and what kind of person do u thinki am? lol
fank for ya review hun
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