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PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 4:09 pm    Post subject: :: A Walk In The Clouds :: Ended :: Add 23/09 Reply with quote
Hiyaa +waves+
This is the Sequel to ++ A Love Like This Takes Some Time ++ , so if u wanna know what happened check it out Wink

I hope u enjoy reading this fic onhere on bb (or on dunkinet when bb closes).

Well ive talked enough already here's the sequel people Mr. Green

It might look very long for a first addie but Ive copied the story onhere from bb and it would be confusing for the girls that already read it to read the adds again







It had been 2 full years since Chloe and Lee first met. It had been a half years since Lee cheated on her with Kirsten and exactly 2 weeks ago she had left him after he cheated on her again.

‘My one big mistake was marrying him dad’ Chloe said putting his cup of coffee on the table.
‘No it wasnt’ Richard shook his head and sighted ‘Hunnie the guy loves you!’
‘Yeah he does… till he see’s some other goodlooking girl, Im not goin back to him dad’
‘Then at least talk to him’
‘I dont want to know his excuse dad, oh wait it probably be “I was drunk, im soo sorry” pff’ Chloe rolled her eyes and sat down on the couch.
‘He wants to talk to you, tell you things..’
‘Well Im in no need of talking to him. Ive forgiven him the first time, Ive forgiven him his mistake and he promised me he would never ever do that to me again and what does he do? He does it again. As much as I love or loved him, he has crossed a line Dad. He said his vows to me, that he would respect me, that I was his number one. Yeah right’ Chloe sighted
‘Ur pregnant Chloe, its his child, u cant keep avoiding him’
‘Oh dad please…’
‘What about little Liam? Do u rather want Kirsten to come back and take care of him?’
‘Ofcourse not!’
‘Look for all I know she put the blonde girl, whats her name again?’
‘Evie’
‘She put Evie up to do it, so he would leave u. I think she must have thought when she cant have him, u cant have him.’
‘I dont care what she thought dad, I dont care if she put the girl upto it or not, Lee should have stopped her, Said no’
‘Hun please, I know u still love him’
‘I dont’ Chloe shook her head
‘I know the look on your face when u told everyone you were pregnant, The look on your face the morning after ur weddingnight when u guys walked outside. You were so in love, ur not goin to tell me thats all gone now!’
‘He has hurted me dad, hurted me alot!’

+ Ding Dong +

‘Ill be right back’ Chloe walked out of the room and went to open the door.
She opened the door but found no-one there, she looked around and noticed Lee standing at his black audi tt. He looked up at her and walked over to the door.
‘What are you doin here’ Chloe snapped as she rolled her eyes
‘I need ..; I want to talk to you’ Lee looked at her in a hurt way.
‘Ive got nothing to say to you Lee’ She shook her head and was about to close the door.
‘Baby please!’ Lee put his hand against the door to stop it from closing and slowly pushed it open.
‘Just listen to me… nothing happened’
‘Ofcourse not, My mind made up that ive seen a sextape of it’ Chloe rolled her eyes and closed the door.

‘Chloe open the door’ Lee banged his hand on it.
Chloe leaned against the door and looked up, noticing her dad standing in the doorway.
‘Well then? Talk to him!’
‘Daad!’ Chloe crossed her arms
‘If u want to hear the truth…’
‘I know the truth, ive seen it with my own eyes!’ Chloe shook her head ‘I cant believe ur choosing his side now!’
‘Im choosing nobody’s side… I just want you to now the truth’ Richard said and walked upto her. ‘Lee’s no bad boy, to be honest, I like him!’ he said placing his hands on her shoulder. ‘Talk to him’
‘I dont want to’ Chloe shook her head.
‘If not for yourself then do it for me’ he softly smiled. ‘I have to go now’ he said and placed a kiss on her cheek. ‘Please talk to him’ he said and walked out true the backdoor.
‘Bye dad’ she sighted and turned around looking at the door.
‘Baby, I know ur still there, open up! I need to talk to you… Please!’ Lee said desperatly.
‘No more then 5 minutes’ Chloe shot him a look while she opened the door.
‘Chloe I…’
‘Well then go on, tic tac, times running out’ she tapped the watch on her wrist while walking to the livingroom.
‘Its not what u think u saw on that tape.’
‘O Lee for crying out loud! I think the images said enough!’
‘Nothing happened Chloe!’
‘Ofcooooourse not’
‘Its the truth!’
‘Oh then I must have imagined u on a bed and her almost naked’ She shot him a look
‘No.. no… that actually did happen’
‘See! Ur just a liar’
‘Im not! Nohting happened I didnt…’
‘U didnt have sex with her? Come on Lee!’ Chloe yelled ‘Its been caught on camera, she gave me details she can only see when ur wearing nothing… NOTHING!’ Chloe yelled as her eyes filled with tears.
‘Chloe let me explain…’
‘No! No! Ive had enough of you and your lies, Leave Lee!’
‘But baby!’
‘Dont baby me! U know where the door is Lee’ She turned around and walked over to the kitchen.
Lee sighted and walked out.
Chloe leaned against the kitchen cabinets and watched true the kitchenwindow how Lee got in his car and drove off.
‘u bast@rd’ she placed her head in her hands and started crying

What is here will soon be gone
When the leaves are falling
Then maybe we could fall apart


Lee looked at the rings he was holding in his hand, he closed his eyes and closed his hand.
'Im not getting her back Dunc' Lee said quietly
'Ofcourse u are!'
'Im not' he looked up at him and softly shook his head. 'She's not goin to forgive me'
'Nothing happened dude!'
'I know that! But Chloe wont believe me...'
'Show her the tape then!'
'Like she's goin to like the beginning' Lee rolled his eyes and sighted
'The beginning might give a total wrong impression but its not like u banged the girl!'
'You know if u guys never took me there this wouldnt have happened'
'Oh so now its our fault?!' Duncan looked at Lee in disbelieve
'Admit it! it partly is!'
'Dont go there Lee.. dont go there' Duncan shook his head and nearly crushed the beercan he was holding in his hand
'Im sorry Duncan, I just....' Lee opened his hand and took out the wedding ring and engagement ring'I just dont know what to do enymore'
'Things will be alright again Lee...'
'No, I know Chloe' Lee shook his head. 'Chloe's hurt and...'
'Look mate' Duncan said down next to Lee. 'Tell me honestly, the truth, nothing happened right?'
'Something happened but not in the way Chloe thinks!'


‘Ok but thats a thing that did happen!’ Duncan looked at Lee and shook his head.
‘I know I shouldnt have gone with her, but… I was drunk’
‘Ur excuse about beein drunk wont save u out of this mate’ Duncan looked at him.
‘Maybe, maybe its better like this…’
‘What do u mean?’ Duncan looked at him wondering
‘That she not with me…’
‘Do u know what ur saying?’ Duncan looked at him bigeyed
‘Well then atleast I cant hurt her feelings with my big idiotic brain’ Lee shook his head, stood up and gently placed the rings in a little box, he looked down at the ring on his finger, was ready to pull it off, but pauzed for a second…
‘Dont.., dont u dare pull that ring off ur finger!’ Duncan said as h e walked over to Lee and placed his hand on his, to prevent him from pulling the ring off. ‘Dont u go giving up now Lee, this is not the Lee I know!’
‘I cant Duncan!’ Lee said looking at him.
‘U love the girl! The Lee I know would do EVERYTHING to get his girl back!’
‘I CANT GET HER BACK DUNCAN!’ Lee yelled and placed his weddingring in the box aswell.
‘I cant believe u! I CANT FKN BELIEVE YOU!’ Duncan shook his head and walked with lee’s weddingring to Lee


And this is the price that you pay
For being smart in a stupid way
You stand there staring while you lover walks away
Being smart, in a stupid way


[b]Chloe and Lee in happier times[b]
Weve spotted Lee Ryan from Blue all alone the past weeks, we wonder whats goin on... Have they broke up? We even wonder if he has got enything to do with Chloe been taken into...

Lee layed down the paper and looked at duncan puzzeled as he ran into the room out of breath
'Lee.... youve...' Duncan sighted and catched his breath
'Yeah? I what?' he softly laughed
'We need to get to hospital'
'Why?' Lee laughed
'Ant thinks he broke his foot'
Lee looked at duncan and burst out laughing 'alriiiight' Lee said, got up and walked towards the others.
'You ok ant?' Jb looked at him
'Does it hurt?' Lee popped his head inbetween Jb's and Simons
'Ofcourse it does Lee' Ant rolled his eyes and sighted.
'C'mon lets go' Duncan softly laughed and got his key's 'Ill bring the car up front'

+At hospital+
'Im goin for a cup of coffee' Lee said
'Bring one for me 2' Duncan said as lee walked out
'Will do!' Lee said and turned around the corner.
'Can I have the file of mrs Smith please'
Lee frooze in his tracks and looked around. Mrs smith? Wait ? Chloe?
Yeah thanks, pass them on to Dr. Ward please
Lee walked towards the corner and looked around.
'Can u please ask him to paige me as soon as he gets out of that meeting? thanks' The nurse smiled at the girl at the reception desc and turned around, nearly bumping into Lee.
'Excuse me' she softly laughed
'No wait... I heard u talking about Mrs. Smith, as in Chloe smith?'
'Im sorry, I cant talk about patients' she shook her head and was ready to walk on.
'No Wait, I know her... I know her very well'
'If u'd know her ver well u would know she was here yes or no' The nurse looked at him and walked off.
'Please, Im a good friend of her... please, is she here? where is she?
Lee looked at the nurse and she sighted.
'Alright, Yes Chloe Smith is inhere'
'Is she alright, can I see her??'
'Room 205'
'Thanks Lee smiled'
'U do are aware she has lost one of her babies are you?' The nurse looked at Lee wondering, but then walked off as someone called her.
'What?' Lee said shocked and walked over to her room. Chloe layed on the bed sleeping, she had bruises on her face and some scars.
'Omg Baby what happened?' Lee looked at Chloe and couldnt believe this was happening, she looked awfull.
He reached out to his pocket and grabbed something out, it was the little box, he opened it and got out her weddingring. He looked at it and then slid it on her finger.
'Im sorry, I feel guilty, I wish I know what happened, I wish I was there to prevent this...' His eyes filled up with tears as he reminded the words of the nurse again. "U do are aware she has lost one of her babies are you?'
'How... Why' Lee tried to stop the tears rolling down his cheeks but he couldnt... Who did this to her?

Lost and all alone
I always thought that I could make it on my own
Since you left I hardly make it through the day
My tears get in the way
And I need you back to stay

I wander through the night
And search the world to find
The words to make it right
All I want is just the way it used to be

Lee placed his hand on hers and sighted, He looked up as the door opened and Dr ward walked inside.
‘Lee?’ He said confused
‘Why didnt enyone call me?’ Lee raised his voice
‘It was her request’
‘Thats bullocks and u know it!’ Lee yelled ‘She’s my wife, ive got the right to know when she’s in hospital’ Lee let go of Chloe’s hand and walked over to him.
‘Lee calm down’
‘Derek I wont!’
‘Lee.. LEE… MR. Ryan!’ Dr.Ward yelled as Lee didnt listen to him
‘yes…’
‘Chloe has lost one of the babie’s’ He said and looked at Lee
‘She…’ Lee looked down and went quiet.
‘But I can tell you the other baby is fine.’
‘Other baby?’ Lee looked at him shocked
‘Yes the other baby’ Dr Ward softly smiled
‘Are u saying she had…’
‘Each womb had its own baby’
‘Wich… wich baby did she loose?’
‘Im afraid it was the first baby, im sorry Lee’
Lee closed his eyes and took a deep breath.
Chloe softly sighted and opened her eyes. Dr Ward smiled and walked over to her. ‘Hey, how are you doin?’
‘ok I guess’ Chloe softly nodded
‘Omg Chloe, baby!’ Lee turned around and walked over to her.
‘Lee?’ Chloe said shocked and Looked at dr Ward
‘I didnt tell him,, he found out himself’
‘What are you doin here?’ Chloe snapped and rolled her eyes
‘What happened baby?’
‘Dont go baby’in me now!’ Chloe snapped ‘You know this is all your fault!’ Chloe raised her voice. ‘Its all you bl00dy fault! If you would use ur brain instead of ur thing, This wouldnt have happened, LEAVE!’ Chloe turned around, facing the other side and put her hands infront of her face.
‘Chloe what happened?’
‘Just leave Lee’ Chloe sobbed
‘Lee I think its best for both you and Chloe that you leave’
‘But Derek…’
‘Lee please!’ Dr Ward looked at him.
‘I love you Chloe! I wont give up! I Love you!’ Lee said and walked out.

‘Hey mate, well appearantly Ant’s fine, its not broken like he thought’ Duncan laughed as he bumped into Lee. ‘Long way for coffee’ Duncan laughed.
‘Oh duncan’ Lee rolled his eyes and walked on.
‘Oi, whats wrong?’ Duncan followed him.
‘Nothing… just leave me.’ Lee sighted and walked out of the hospital into the pooring rain.



‘Are you alright?’ Dr Ward asked sitting down next to Chloe
‘Do I look like im alright Derek?’ Chloe shook her head and sat up straight.
‘Im sorry about that hun’ he said while he placed the file next to him.
‘Shlouldnt u be visiting other patients?’
‘They will call me when the need me, I can see you need a talk’ he softly smiled and placed his hand on her shoulder.
‘Thx Derek’ Chloe softly smiled and sighted
‘You dont have to be so hard on yourself or on Lee’
‘Our relationship was great, till Kirsten comes into our lives’ Chloe said and grabbed a tissue.
‘Is she the one that did this?’
‘If Lee wouldnt have cheated on me again this all woudldnt have happened, I would be pregnant of ‘twins’ and we would still be together.
‘Chloe hun ur avoiding my question, did Kirsten do this to you?’
‘No’ Chloe shook her head
‘Honestly?’
Chloe sighted and looked outside. ‘You know I found out it was a boy, a lovly little boy, he’d probably have the looks of his father’
Dr. Ward went quiet, looked to the ground and back to Chloe ‘Im sorry’
‘I cant believe he’s gone, Ill never hold him, Ill never properly know what he’d look like, wont look into his small eyes,…’ Chloe burried her head in her hands and started crying.
‘I know it hurts… I know’ Dr Ward pulled her into a hug and just then the door opened and a nurse appeared.
‘Oh.. Dr. Ward, we need you at…’
‘Ill be right there’ he softly smiled
‘Ok’ the nurse smiled back and closed the door behind her.
‘Chloe listen to me, youve got to be strong, Even if your baby isnt close with you, he’ll always be in your thoughts, in your heart, You will always love him’
Chloe softly nodded and wipped away the tears.
‘Ive got to go now, Ill pop in later today ok?’ Derek softly smiled and patted her shoulder.
‘Derek?’ Chloe said as he picked up the file and walked towards the door.
‘Yes?’ he turned around
‘Should…Should I call Lee?’
‘I think itll do u good when uve talked to him’ he softly smiled and closed the door behind him.
Chloe looked at the Phone on the nightstand, she pauzed before picking it and dialing Lee’s number.


Lee walked down the streets of London, now fully soaked, The water dripping out of his coat and Jeans…Not only did he loose Liam, Kirsten had come for him 2 weeks ago, now he had lost another Child. He searched for his keys and put them in the lock of the house. He slammed the door shut behind his back and threw his keys on the table before walking upstairs to take a shower. It all seemed so unreal, Chloe in hospital, loosing a child, … He pulled out a new pair of jeans, boxers and a black t-shirt and walked to the bathroom.
Meanwhile downstairs Chloe left a message for him.
…. Ehm hey Lee, its Chloe…. We… we need to talk… I cant handel this nomore, its all getting to much for me… I… This needs to end… Call me back.
Lee undid himself of his fully soaked clothes and threw them on a pail in the corner of the bathroom. Lee stepped into the shower and let the hot water run over his body. It all started to sink in. The image of a hurt and bruised Chloe ran over and over again in his mind, only one name popping up that could be responsible for it all… Kirsten. After he got dressed again he walked downstairs, finding the one person that he needed… His mum.
‘M…mum’
‘Hey Lee’ Sheila softly smiled
‘What.. are you doin here?’
‘Just came in to say hello cant I?’
Lee tried to put on a smile but failed.
‘Whats wrong?’ Sheila asked walking over to him.
‘I just dont know what to do enymore, Seems like everything I love, everything I do, just turns out and goes the wrong way’ Lee ran his hands true his hair and leaned against the wall.
‘Lee what happened? Whats wrong?’ Sheila walked over to her son and hugged him.
‘Everythings goin wrong mum, just everything, Chloe, The baby, Me,…’
‘Ooh Lee, you poor boy, whats happened?’ Sheila looked up at him and cupped his cheeks with her hands.
‘Ive failed.. in everything a loving husband should do…’






Sheila tried to stay strong, tried not to cry… It ate her up inside seeing her son like this, seeing what he’s goin true, things he didnt deserve…

Chloe placed the Phone back to where it was and a picture standing against a glass cought her eye. She picked it up and stroke it with her finger. She tried to stay strong, she tried not to cry, but failed. The image of the small baby, the small boy she had carried, held close with her for 4.5 months long, made her burst out crying. There was a soft knock on the door.
‘Go away, I dont want to talk to enyone now’ Chloe wipped her eyes and looked up into the eyes of a blonde girl.
‘Im Sorry’ Evie whispered.
‘No ur not’ Chloe sobbed and shook her head. ‘I bet ur enjoying it seeing me like this’
‘Chloe I didnt want this! I swear’
‘Evie just leave! Go visit Lee and give him a shag again, just leave me alone’ Chloe sobbed
‘Im not goin to see Lee, thats not why Im here, Im here couse I want you to know the truth’
‘I know the truth, ive seen it with my own eyes’
‘If u did, Lee would be here by your side and …’
‘And what?’
‘I regret what ive dont to you 2, I didnt… I didnt want this result…’
‘Youve had sex with Lee the day before we were goin to get married, u tell me the day after with a grin on your face like ur enjoying to tell me and now u come here saying ur sorry?!’ Chloe raised her voice
‘Im sorry that ive hurt you..’
‘You dont know what hurt is Evie! You have no idea what im feeling right now! Ive lost my Child, Lee’s baby! Due to you and Kirsten!’
‘When she asked me I was just a girl looking for some fun, I did have fun that night, couse I was partly drunk, youve got no idea how much I regret what ive done’ Evie walked over to her.
‘right’ Chloe rolled her eyes and looked outside.
‘I.. Lee didnt… we… It didnt get that far Chloe, Lee said No’ Evie said
Chloe looked up at Evie ‘Excuse me?
‘That tape only shows the beginning, not how it turned out, he said no… He didnt want to cheat on you and he didnt. Nothing more has happened then what you saw, ‘IT’ never happend, some fooling around maybe, but not what you think’ Evie shook her head.
‘Why are you telling me this?’
‘Couse I want you to know lee’s telling the truth, that nothing happened, He hasent had sex with me, it never got that far’
‘Why did you give me that stupid tape then?’
‘I had to, Kirsten said I had to’
‘I didnt want to hurt you, I had to tell all thoose things from her…. Im sorry!’

Meanwhile at Lee’s place lee had just heard the message Chloe had left and was on his way to hospital.
Lee walked in but frooze in his steps as he saw Evie.
‘You know my story, you know the truth, now its upto you’ Evie looked at Chloe, turned around and walked out.




‘What was she doin here?’ Lee asked
‘What happened that evening Lee?’ Chloe looked at him
‘Nohting! Absolutly nothing! Baby, how many times do I need to tell you, nothing happened’
‘ok’ Chloe said short
‘Why? What did she tell?! Did she tell you that something happened?’
‘Dont go yelling at me now!’ Chloe raised her voice.
‘Im sorry!’ Lee sighted and walked over to her. ‘I just… Chloe I miss you’ Lee looked at her
‘Why cant we have a normal life? Why does kirsten always have to come inbetween us?!’
‘Baby…’ Lee sighted
‘Dont… dont call me baby’ Chloe looked up at Lee and sighted.
‘Chloe, please…’
‘No Lee’ She shook her head

+Flashback+
Chloe leaned against the kitchen cabinets and watched true the kitchenwindow how Lee got in his car and drove off.
‘u bastard’ she placed her head in her hands and started crying
Chloe looked up and sniffed away her tears as the door went again.
‘I dont need Ur…. Oh’ Chloe snapped as she opened the door
‘Hello to you to’ Kirsten said
‘WHAT are U doin here?’ Chloe rolled her eyes and crossed her arms.
‘Sad and teary eyes? Guess Lee just dropped by?’ Kirsten said and softly grinned
‘Get that grin of ur face’ Chloe snapped and closed the door.
She sighted and walked into the livingroom. ‘damned’ Chloe sighted and wipped her eyes
‘Its very rude to close the door infront of someone’s face’ Kirsten walked in.
‘How did u get in? Dont u get it that ur not welcome here!’
‘Please’ Kirsten laughed
‘Ur not welcome here, not after everything u did!’
‘Oh so what did I do?’
‘You know damn well, what you did!’ Chloe yelled
‘My memorie doesnt do well, Give me an idea…’
‘You’re not funny!’ Chloe hissed
‘Oh wait, did Lee cheat on you again?’ Kirsten said amused
Chloe walked upto her, slapped her across the face ‘LEAVE’ she hissed.
Kirsten put her hand on her cheek and shot Chloe a look.
‘I mean it Kirsten’ Chloe smiled in amusement as she noticed the handprint on Kirsten’s cheek
‘Sweet, and I just thought u were an innocent girl, you just made a wrong move’
‘Oh Kirsten please, Im not scared of you, you think youre all that but ur not!’
‘Well youre not that all aswell, seeing how u ran away from Lee just couse he cheated on you’
‘Fµck him and Fµck you Kirsten, cant believe that youve got nothing better to do then selling ur story’s to papers just to get some money’ Chloe shook her head and walked upstairs
‘Do I?’ Kirsten said
Chloe pauzed and turned around. ‘Leave me alone!’
‘ooh feeling treathened are you’
‘Please from u? Not at all’ Chloe rolled her eyes
‘Im not selling my story’s on purpose, you MADE me do that’
‘No u dont couse the only reason uve slept with Lee all along was couse u’d have a good story there, u got him drunk so he wouldnt say no. Ur phathetic Kirsten’ Chloe shook her head and threw her a dirrty look.
Kirsten reached out her hand and smacked Chloe across the face. An unexpected move, Chloe lost her balance and tumbeled down some stairs, hitting her head and belly.
‘Oopz’ Kirsten grinned and walked down.
‘Bltch’ Chloe looked up at her and slowly got up.
‘Its not like I did that on Purpose’ Kirsten rolled her eyes and opened the door. ‘Im leaving now’
Chloe shot her a look and leaned against the wall.

It seemed ages the Chloe sat against the wall, her hands on her belly, trying to avoid the pain.
‘Hellooo… oh’ Kitty wanted to knock on the door but it went open by itself. She stepped inside and found a trembling Chloe sitting against the wall.
‘Chloe? Whats wrong?’
‘She’s been here’ Chloe looked up at Kitty
‘Who?’
‘I… auch… somethings wrong kitty’ Chloe looked at her in fright as the pain got worse. ‘Somethings wrong Kitty, I dont…I auch’ Chloe screamed out in pain.






Please leave ur comments about it Mr. Green


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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2006 9:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
a new addie wil be up soon
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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2006 9:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Wow, I'm da first reviewer here *pokes her tonuge out for Nads and Lozzie*


I cant wait to know what happened between Chloe and Lee..
This fic is touching me truely Sad :cry
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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
**Love@1stSight4Blue** wrote:
Wow, I'm da first reviewer here *pokes her tonuge out for Nads and Lozzie*


I cant wait to know what happened between Chloe and Lee..
This fic is touching me truely Sad :cry
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*pokes tongue out too*

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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 10:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
*puts tent up and waits for an add whilst listening to Bon Jovi*

Oooooh she's a little runaway

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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 11:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laughing Ohuh not the tent again nadine! Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
i love the fic and i love the visuals...it really makes the story more dunno...real maybe...lol...
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Laughing Ohuh not the tent again nadine! Laughing


Yes, the tent again. Laughing

Do you have a problem with my tent? Shocked x
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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Monica wrote:
i love the fic and i love the visuals...it really makes the story more dunno...real maybe...lol...
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing


Hey! Thx for reading this Very Happy
Yes I think its good to give the Person's a face and stuff, makes it abit real like you said haha

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Nadine -> Ive got no problem with your tent at all! Its just abit huge? Laughing

Sara- > Hey hunnie! haha youre the first reviewer indeed Mr. Green

I will post more as soon as Im on my own pc again. My fkn screen isnt working so I cant get on and get my addies! I hope itll be fixed soon, my bro's goin to take a look at it tonight and tomorrow and hopefully the problem will be sorted
Till then
KEep bumping plz!

Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 1:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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Monica wrote:
i love the fic and i love the visuals...it really makes the story more dunno...real maybe...lol...
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing


Hey! Thx for reading this Very Happy
Yes I think its good to give the Person's a face and stuff, makes it abit real like you said haha

xxx


Nadine -> Ive got no problem with your tent at all! Its just abit huge? Laughing

Sara- > Hey hunnie! haha youre the first reviewer indeed Mr. Green

I will post more as soon as Im on my own pc again. My fkn screen isnt working so I cant get on and get my addies! I hope itll be fixed soon, my bro's goin to take a look at it tonight and tomorrow and hopefully the problem will be sorted
Till then
KEep bumping plz!

Mr. Green

xxx


Huge?!

It's a bl00dy Iglo tent, it ain't huge at all. Shocked Rolling Eyes

Okies darl. Very Happy x
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Oh Sez!! Wont ya add?
We've waited enough!!! Shocked
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