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feelingduncan UBNewbie

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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:47 am Post subject: Feeling Blue!? {by Iris} July 1st: chap 11+12 |
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Hello!
here's my fic Feeling Blue!? Loooong fic, already finished so don't worry it won't be put on hold or just not finished...
hope you like it, and otherwise: too bad for you! i'm gonna post all up anyway!
xxx
iris
CHAPTER 1
I get on board. It's a really nice boat, with big white sails. As soon as we're all on board, we sail off. I hadn't seen Duncan for a while, so I sit down on his lap and wrap my arms tightly around his neck. He hugs me and we start kissing passionately.
After a while I stand up and say: "I'm going to sunbathe."
I take the big bag that I brought and lay down the big towels at the front of the boat, in the sun. Duncan followed me and searches something in the bag. I start to unbutton my shirt and see all four heads turn at me. 'What are they looking at?' I ask myself. I see that Duncan wants to say something so I turn to him while I take off my shirt. I see a smile spread over his face.
"You're already wearing your bikini," he smiles.
"Yeah, of course. What did you think, that I was going to change clothes here?" I say sarcastically and look at the other guys.
"Uhhhh," says Duncan a bit silly, the others are also looking a bit stupid at me.
"You're all crazy," I laugh out loud, and throw my shirt and skirt at Duncan, who puts them in the bag.
"Well, Í'm going to change," he laughs when he finds his swimming shorts. He goes downstairs and returns really quick, wearing only his swimming shorts.
He looks really great! It might sound stupid, but I've never seen him wearing only shorts, even though we're together for one month now.
Well, together… We met only in the weekends, but it's a month ago that we first kissed. We're sooo much in love with eachother, but we didn't go further than kissing until now. Today I can look at his body all day, and rub sunscreen on him, and go swimming with him, this is going to be a GOOD day!
Duncan walks to me and whispers in my ear: "You're looking gorgeous."
"So do you," I whisper back and give him a big kiss. I lie down on the towel on my belly when Duncan takes the sunscreen. He starts putting sunscreen on my back very gentle. I relax under his soft hands and he massages the sunscreen onto the back of my whole body. I really enjoy it.
"Are you finished?" I ask when he sits down besides me. He nods.
"That's a pity," I grin. He bends over to me and gives me a light kiss on my ear.
"You forgot my face," I say when I sit upright next to him. He starts kissing me all over my face.
"No, I mean the sunscreen," I giggle.
"I know," he grins back. I close my eyes and he puts it on my face. I open my eyes again and look in his baby-blue eyes. I feel butterflies in my belly and a big smile appears on my face. I give him a deep kiss.
I take the sunscreen and when I look over Dunk's shoulder I see Lee looking at us. He pretends to be vomiting when he sees me looking at him. I grin and put up my middle finger at him. Duncan gives me a questioning look.
"Lee," I say.
"Is he vomiting again?" he sighs sarcastically. I nod.
Dunk lies down on his belly and I kneel down over him with my legs on either side of him. I start massaging the sunscreen all over the back of his body. I feel he's getting relaxed and I see from his face that he's enjoying it. The others have also changed into swimming shorts and lie down around us.
"Will you also do my back?" Lee grins when he sees that I'm massaging Dunk's whole body.
"Don't you ever get tired of yourself?" Antony sighs. Lee has been teasing us from the moment I met them this morning. In fact, he always teases us, not only today.
"Lay still and shut up," Ant commands Lee and puts sunscreen on his back.
Pfeeeeww, I got out of that easily. Dunk turns his head at me and grins. I realize he must have felt my confusion, and go on massaging him. When I'm done I lie down. Oh, I forgot his face too, I grin to myself, right at the moment that Dunk lifts up his head to say something. I put sunscreen on his face. I see he's looking at my breasts. I start blushing. This is also the first time that he sees mé without shirt and skirt. When he realizes I followed his look he also starts to blush.
I lie down again next to him. We all chat and make jokes, it's really fun to be with that four crazy guys. I know Ant, Simon and Lee almost as well as I know Dunk, because we usually hang out together when I go to Dunk in the weekends. Dunk and I lay close to eachother, we're touching eachother's arm and hand all the time. We really can't stop touching eachother, but that's mostly because we hadn't seen eachother for more than a week, because I had exams. I needed last weekend to study, but I wanted to go to Dunk anyway.
"No way, you're going to study for your exams. I really miss you, and I wish you were here, but I also want you to pass your exams," he said. And that was it. He simply forbade me to visit him before the exams. So I stayed home and studied hard, yesterday afternoon I finished the last exam. And this morning I got up early to take the first train to the airport of Amsterdam, to fly to London.
I study at the university of Utrecht, that's a big city in the centre of the Netherlands. Monday I have to start a new subject, but I arranged with some friends that they e-mail me what I have to do, so I can stay with Dunk much longer this time. When I told the guys what I arranged, they all laughed really hard.
"That's really inventive. Misusage of the internet I call that," Ant laughs.
"Yeah, you call in sick, and you return with a nice sun-tan," Lee grins.
"She's clever," Duncan says proudly.
I notice that Dunk gets a bit restless, and the others too. I take a look at Dunk's watch; we're sunbathing for less than an hour. I lay down my head and close my eyes. I'm feeling lazy. After a couple of minutes Dunk starts pinching me softly. I slowly open one eye.
"Haven't you had enough of the sunbathing yet?" he asks.
"No."
"You don't want to come and swim with me?" he asks with a semi-sad face.
"No. They'll come with you," I wave my hand at the others. "I'll join you later," I say and close my eyes again.
"The last one's a loser," I hear two of them calling at the same time. Everybody jumps up and jumps over me. I'm scared to death; I didn't expect that at all.
"Assholes," I call after them. I hear them laughing out loud and than a big splash when they all jump into the water.
The boat's lying at a couple of hundreds of meters from an island, there's nobody else but us. I think we're going to stay here all day. I hear the guys yelling at eachother, swimming and splashing around. 'I'll join them when they don't have that much energy anymore,' I think lazily to myself. I doze off a little.
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* Natasha * UBNewbie

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Hey Iris!...I read this fic on the BB...it's wonderful!... ...can't wait to read it again!...add soonies!...Lv, Tashxxx _________________ To my nutty angels crew, you're the best mates, a girl could ask for. Love you guys heaps!
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Anouk UBNewbie
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 1:15 pm Post subject: |
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Im so gonna read this again!  _________________ Pinkpop'08, 30/05 - 01/06/08
Paramore, 17/06/08
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Michy<3 Just Warming Up
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 2:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Anouk wrote: | Im so gonna read this again!  |
Me too.
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feelingduncan UBNewbie

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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:23 pm Post subject: |
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thanx Tash, Anouk and Michelle!
than i'll post it up for all my old fans
xxx
iris
CHAPTER 2
I hear someone climbing back in the boat.
"Aaaaargh," I jump up when I get a lot of cold water on my back. I see Lee running back and diving into the water.
"Watch out," I call and jump of the boat to make a water-bomb.
"A little water is all she needed to get into the water," Lee laughs out loud. I swim towards him and jump on his neck. I push him under water. He comes up again and tries to grab me. Dunk splashes a lot of water to him with his feet. Lee starts coughing loudly: "You're mean."
"And you're not mean," I reply sarcastically.
Dunk's gone. I turn around and see that he's swimming away from the boat. I follow him. He stops and reaches out his arm to pull me towards him.
"You can stand here," I say surprised.
"Yeah, kind of," he nods. We're closer to the island now. The water reaches to his shoulders, except when we're lifted up in a wave. I put my arms around his neck, and my legs around his waist, because I can't reach the bottom. We start kissing passionately. We push our bodies tight against eachother and touch and caress eachother almost everywhere, as far as it's possible in the water. It feels strange, we are kind of weightless, we can touch, but we can't see eachother's bodies, but we can look in eachother's eyes.
"I love you," he says and looks deep into my eyes. I get all warm inside. This is the first time he has said that to me!
"I love you too," I answer. I give him a big hug.
We kiss for a while and than go back to the boat. The others are already sunbathing again. I wonder for how long they'll lie down now. I massage sunscreen on Dunk's back and lie down. I unbutton by bikini top at my back and pull away the straps from my back and shoulders. I keep my body flat to the floor al the time.
"Iris going topless," Lee grins.
"No way. I just don't like the white straps," I shake my head. He pulls a disappointed face. I reach out my arm to slap him, but my arm is too short. Instead he punches me, because his arms are much longer.
"Hey!" Dunk calls and punches Lee.
"Hihi," I giggle when Lee rubs his arm where Dunk hit him. Duncan massages sunscreen all over my body and we sunbathe and chat for a while.
I doze off again. That always happens to me when I'm lying in the sun.
"Sleep heads," I hear someone calling loudly. I open my eyes and see that Duncan also lifts up his head sleepy.
"Nice couple you are. Both asleep as soon as you close your eyes," Simon laughs.
"Are you coming swimming," Lee asks and pinches me. He surprised me and I lift up my head and shoulders.
'Shit, I unbuttoned my bikini top,' I realize and quickly put my arms in front of my breasts. Lee starts to laugh very hard.
"You did that on purpose," I call at him. He only laughs harder. I quickly put my bikini top back on.
"Yeah, I'm going swimming," I say and jump up and run to the edge of the boat. Lee is still quicker than me so I jump after him in the water. I quickly grab his arm before he swims away. We struggle and he pushes me under water. I close my eyes because I'm afraid I'll lose my contact lenses. I grab Lee to pull myself up.
Hey, I grabbed his swimming shorts. He's still struggling to hold me under the water, I think he doesn't notice that I'm pulling on his shorts. I dive deeper and pull his shorts with me. Yes! I took them off. I swim as far as I can under water. I swim to the surface and gasp for breath. I see that I'm close to Dunk, Ant and Simon.
Laughing very hard I wave Lee's shorts above my head. "Hey Lee, I think I have something that belongs to you," I cough, because I'm laughing so hard I can hardly swim. The others also start laughing out loud and Lee quickly swims towards me, blushing badly. He grabs his shorts from my hand, I'm still laughing so hard I can't swim away.
"Cool job, Iris!" Simon laughs.
"Watch out, I thínk he'll take revenge," Ant says.
I swim away a bit with Dunk. He hugs me and gives me a kiss.
"You know, I missed you sooo badly," he whispers. I smile and we start kissing passionately. I have my legs wrapped around his waist and I kiss his neck and chest.
"Do you want to go to bed with me?" he asks.
"I already slept in your bed with you," I grin.
"You knów what I mean," he grins back.
"Yeah. Yeah, I want to go to bed with you," I answer, serious again. I give him a deep kiss. He slowly starts to take off my bikini top.
"Don't let it float away, that would be too embarrassing," I warn him.
"Why? You don't have anything to be embarrassed about," he says and caresses and kisses my breasts.
"You don't have anything to be embarrassed about too, but you're not walking around naked either," I reply.
"Do you have an answer to everything," he sighs.
"Hmmmm," I pretend to be thinking hard.
"No, you don't. When I first met you, you were kind of shy," he answers his own question.
"Yeah, dûh. That's because I liked you very much. I don't give stupid answers to people that I don't know well, especially not to a boy that I fancy," I grin.
"You see? You have an answer to a stupid question again," he says.
"No, I have a stupid answer to a question, haha. Does it bother you?" I grin.
"No, I like it. Especially when you do that to other people," he laughs. While we were talking he kept on touching and kissing my breasts.
"You have something with boobs, don't you? You can't stop touching them and looking at them," I ask.
He looks at me, a bit surprised. "Did you know that you touch my belly and chest all the time?" he replies.
"Am I?" I say surprised. I watch my hands, indeed I'm touching his chest when we're talking.
"You're totally right. I don't have an answer to that," I laugh.
"You really hadn't noticed it, had you?" he asks amused.
"Nope. But it's your own fault, you're looking so good that I have to touch you," I grin.
"Well, same to you," he smiles. I start blushing.
"Are you blushing?" he grins. I nod and blush even worse. "Why? Can't I give you compliments?" he asks.
"Hehe. No," I blush.
"Come here, cute little girl," he grins and grabs me tightly. I grin back and we start deep kissing. _________________
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* Natasha * UBNewbie

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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Iris,
Wicked hun!... ...5 *s...lol.. ....add soonies!
Lv,
Tashxxx _________________ To my nutty angels crew, you're the best mates, a girl could ask for. Love you guys heaps!
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Monica UBNewbie

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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:02 pm Post subject: |
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omg iris...i read this fic on your website...i think it was yours... ....oh god girl u made me cry wiw this one...
there really was some turn ups along the way...
but i love the begging...it's so cheeky...lol
can't wait to re-read it
monxxx _________________
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Michy<3 Just Warming Up
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | Hey, I grabbed his swimming shorts. He's still struggling to hold me under the water, I think he doesn't notice that I'm pulling on his shorts. I dive deeper and pull his shorts with me. Yes! I took them off. I swim as far as I can under water. I swim to the surface and gasp for breath. I see that I'm close to Dunk, Ant and Simon.
Laughing very hard I wave Lee's shorts above my head. "Hey Lee, I think I have something that belongs to you," I cough, because I'm laughing so hard I can hardly swim. The others also start laughing out loud and Lee quickly swims towards me, blushing badly. He grabs his shorts from my hand, I'm still laughing so hard I can't swim away. |
Oooh..
Would've loved to see Lee when he realized his shorts were... gone!
Wkd add, more soon!
xxxx _________________ x mich
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feelingduncan UBNewbie

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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:15 pm Post subject: |
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hihi, kissing chappie
xxx
iris
CHAPTER 3
"Let's go back to the boat. I'm getting cold," I say after a while.
"I can make you hot," he says with a naughty smile.
"I bet you can, but please don't do that with them close," I say and take a glance at the others, who are still swimming close to the boat.
"Well, than I guess you should put this back on," he says with a sad face and helps me to put my bikini top back on. We swim back to the boat.
I massage sunscreen on Duncan's front. He keeps smiling very sweet at me while I'm massaging his belly and chest, so I have to kiss him all the time.
"Why do you keep smiling like that?" I ask.
"Because you have a very concentrated look on your face," he grins. I grin back and give him a very loud kiss on his belly.
He starts to laugh: "That tickles." I do it again.
"I've only seen mothers do that to their little children. Are you sure you don't secretly have a little kid?" he laughs.
"No, I have you to do it to," I grin and do it over and over again, until he's cramped with laughter.
"I thought they only did that to babies," I suddenly hear Lee saying behind me. I didn't hear them coming back.
"Oh, than I have the wrong one. You're the baby here," I say with a blank face, trying hard to hold my laughter.
"I'm a baby?" Lee asks.
"Well, you're the youngest," I answer.
"Than how old are you?" he asks suspicious.
Dunk pulls my arm and I fall down next to him. He puts his arm around my shoulders and gives me a loud kiss in my neck. I start giggling.
"I know I look young, but I'm the same age as Ant," I say to Lee.
"You are?" he asks surprised.
"Three weeks younger," I nod.
"What were you doing in the water anyway? You got naked," Lee changes the subject.
"I have no idea what you're talking about," I say with a blank face.
Dunk starts grinning very loud.
"You have no idea? Well Dunk does!" Lee defends himself. "You were sexing," he calls out.
"No! We never had sex," I call out.
"Huh?" he seems shocked. "You're with that rabbit and you never had sex with him?"
"Rabbit? Look who's talking!" Duncan calls out to Lee.
"Maybe one day when he grows up he'll understand that not everything is about sex," Ant grins.
"Yeah right. Than why are you two always touching and kissing eachother," Lee points at Dunk and me.
I quickly take my hands off Dunk's chest and grin sheepishly at Lee, who starts to laugh out loud. Dunk and the others are also shaking with laughter. I feel a bit stupid, I probably also lóók stupid now. Than I also burst into laughter.
"Ooh, you're terrible. I'm not going to listen to you anymore," I laugh and lie back again. I demonstratively put my arm around Dunk, who gives me a big hug.
"We'll leave you two alone. You're way too sticky," Simon says.
They go to the other side of the boat to play cards.
Dunk softly bites in my ear. I turn to him and give him a kiss. I touch his face when we go French kissing.
"What are you doing?" he asks suspicious.
"Nothing. I just wonder what it would feel like to kiss you when you're totally shaven," I say with a serious face.
"You never kissed with a boy who was shaven?" he asks surprised.
"Yes of course. But that was a long time ago," I answer.
"Well, there are three shaven boys you can kiss," he points at the others.
Lee, Ant and Simon immediately turn around to look at us.
"I knew you were all listening," Duncan grins.
"I get to kiss Iris?" Lee grins broadly. Dunk grins back at him. Jee, is he serious? Okay, than I'll play along with the game.
"Okay. I'll kiss you to decide what the difference is with shaven. But I have to make an objective decision, so I'll close my eyes and than kiss you," I say and stand up. They also stand up and stand in front of me.
"Okay, close your eyes," Duncan says. I close them and hear the first one come close to me. I feel two hands grabbing my waist tightly.
"Lee, get your hands off me," I say, my eyes still closed.
"How did you know it was me?" he asks.
"Who else?" I say and open my eyes. "I bet I can even tell who of you kisses me," I grin.
"Okay. Let's start over again," Lee grins back.
"No touching," I warn him. I close my eyes. Someone kisses me for almost a minute.
"That's Lee," I say when he stops. I hear someone else coming to me. I get a long, soft kiss.
"That's Simon," I say when he stops. Okay, now's Ant. Or maybe Dunk, when they try to confuse me. I get another long kiss.
"Hey, that's Lee again," I say surprised. I hear Dunk grinning. I get a long, sweet kiss.
"Hmmm, can I have another one, Ant," I grin when he stops.
Before I can say something else, someone else kisses me. I know it's Duncan, so I give him a deep kiss back.
"How did you know who it was who kissed?" Lee asks curious.
"That's a girls' secret," I tease him.
"Oh, come on," he frowns.
"Okay, I'll tell you. It's very easy. You all smell different," I explain.
"Even when we all smell like sea and sunscreen?" Ant asks surprised. I nod.
"So, do you now know the difference between a shaven and a not-shaven kiss?" Simon asks.
"No, now I just know that you all kiss very different," I grin.
"Yeah, that's because we got a normal kiss, and Dunk got a deep kiss from you," Lee says.
"You really think so? Come here," I dare him. He comes to me and I pull his face towards me and give him a deep kiss.
"Wooow," he says when I let him go.
"You still kiss different than Dunk," I grin.
"Yes of course, I'm a better kisser," Lee laughs.
"Yeah right! If that's what you want to believe," I laugh back at him.
"You just wanted to kiss all of us. First I thought that you were a decent, little girl, but now I know better," Ant jokes.
"It was hís idea to let me kiss you all," I point at Duncan.
"Did you really think that Dunk would have a decent little girl? No way!" Simon laughs.
"Okay that was enough kissing with this little girl. She's mine!" Duncan says and lifts me from the ground. He carries me back to the towels and we go sunbathing again.
"Oh, I didn't put sunscreen on you yet," he suddenly remembers. "I don't want you to get sun burnt because I got distracted," he grins and gives me a loud kiss on my belly. I start to laugh and remember that indeed we stopped putting sunscreen on when I gave him the loud kisses on his belly.
He massages sunscreen on the front of my body. I put my straps on my shoulders down again, to prevent white marks on my shoulders.
"Watch out. You're making it easy for Lee to take revenge," Dunk warns me.
"Oh, when he does that, I'll kick him very hard," I grin.
"I'll warn him," he grins back. He gives me a deep kiss and stands up.
"What are you going to do?" I ask.
"Relax, I'll be right back," he smiles. I lie down on my back and close my eyes to enjoy the sun. I doze off again. _________________
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* Natasha * UBNewbie

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Oooooh....u r lucky!... ...getting to kiss ALL the lads!... ...Wicked hun!...can't wait for more... ...Lee is sooo cheeky... ....kissing you twice...and making u kiss him again...I loved the addy hun!...pwease add soonies! * gives puppy-dog eyes *....thanx for reviewing Tell Me I'm Not Dreaming!..Lv, Tashxxx _________________ To my nutty angels crew, you're the best mates, a girl could ask for. Love you guys heaps!
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Michy<3 Just Warming Up
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Wkd add!
I'd love kiss 'em all, too
Mooooooore!
Oh, and also thanks from me for reading mine and Tash's fic.
xxx _________________ x mich
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feelingduncan UBNewbie

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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:49 pm Post subject: |
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everybody should read 'Tell me i'm not dreaming' by Natasha and Michelle! Great fic, and it has just started!!!!!
xxx
iris
CHAPTER 4
I wake up and feel Dunk giving me a kiss. Without opening my eyes I kiss him back. I feel something different. I open my eyes and see that he has shaven his whole face.
"You're shaven," I say surprised. He nods smiling.
"Just because I wondered…" I say.
"Yeah. Especially for you. So, what do you think of it?" he grins. I touch his whole face with my hands.
"Hmmm, I think I have to try it again," I grin and give him a very long, deep kiss.
"And?" he asks again.
"It's not very different. You're still the best kisser. It's not better or worse," I smile. "But I think it's very sweet that you've shaven just for me," I grin.
"I can be sweet sometimes," he grins back. He lies down next to me. He closes his eyes to sunbathe.
I also close my eyes, but after a couple of minutes I just háve to look at him. I start grinning again when I see that he has shaven especially for me. He notices it and opens his eyes.
"What?"
"Nothing," I quickly say and close my eyes again. After a couple of minutes I give him a kiss.
"And why was that?" he asks with his eyebrows raised.
"I just wanted to remember what it feels like," I grin. I lie down and close me eyes once again. I can't stop grinning to myself.
After a while I just can't lay still anymore and I touch his face.
"Okay, that's it! I'm never going to make such an effort for you again! First I let you kiss all of them, and than I shave myself especially for you, and all you can do is grin about it," he says and tries to look angry. It only makes me grin harder.
"I'm going to grow it back," he says with a serious look on his face.
"Maybe if you concentrate very hard, it will grow faster," I laugh.
"Yeah, make fun of me," he pretends to be offended.
"No, it's very cute," I grin and put my arms around his neck. "You… are… very… cute…" I say and give him a kiss after every word.
He grins at me: "Than I definitely have to grow it back. It's bad for my image to look cute."
"Oh, actually I meant that it's very cute of you that you've shaven it off for me," I grin.
"Oh, I don't look cute?" he says with a sad face.
"You look cute when you look like that," I smile.
"No seriously. What do you like better? Shaven or not shaven?" he asks.
"Hmmm. I don't know," I think out loud.
"You think it looks better not shaven, don't you? Because you start grinning every time you look at me," he says with raised eyebrows.
"That's not because you look funny or something. That's just because you are so sweet to me," I say. He smiles and gives me a kiss, I kiss him back.
"Now seriously. I don't think you look better or worse shaven. It both looks great. Maybe shaven you look younger, but I'm not sure," I say.
"You're sweet," he smiles and gives me a big hug.
We go sunbathing again.
"Are you coming swimming with us?" Lee asks.
"Can't I get a minute of rest?" I say grumpy, he woke me up.
"Were you asleep agáin?" he asks unbelievingly.
"It's not my fault that I didn't sleep much last week. I was busy," I defend myself.
"Yeah, all right, all right. I didn't mean to make you angry," Lee says with his hands up. I start laughing out loud.
"What's so funny?" Lee asks surprised.
"You're even easier to fool than Dunk," I laugh. "Go on, go swimming. I'll join you later," I say to Dunk, who wants to swim.
They leave and I lay back again. It's stupid, now they're gone I can't sleep anymore. I stand up and walk to the side of the boat to see them swimming and fighting. Dunk and Ant are being really crazy, constantly pulling pranks on eachother.
Finally after at least half an hour they notice me watching them.
"Come in," Ant calls.
"How long have you been standing there?" Dunk asks.
"Long enough to see that you are all crazy," I laugh.
"She's been watching us all the time," Lee says.
"Why didn't you say that?" Dunk asks Lee surprised.
"Maybe he's afraid he'll lose his shorts again," Ant grins.
"Come on in," Simon calls.
"Hmmm, okay," I say and jump into the water. I jumped straight down, so I'm going very deep into the water.
Eeeeeeh, I feel something touching my feet! I start swimming up, but something grabs my right foot. I struggle to get loose, but it only gets a better hold on me. I try to kick and get higher, I have to breathe. I'm starting to panic.
Something else also grabs my leg, so I kick even harder. Now it also holds my hand. Ooh, it's a hand. It must be one of the guys, I think relieved, so I stop kicking. I feel he frees me of whatever was holding my foot. I swim up very fast and gasp for breath.
Next to me Duncan dives up. "Are you okay?" he asks worried.
I'm totally out of breath and hold on to his shoulders.
"What happened?" the others ask worried.
"She got stuck in seaweed with her leg," Dunk answers.
"Are you all right?" he asks me again. I cough up some water and nod.
"Yeah, I'm all right," I say when I can finally talk again. "Let's just get away from the seaweed."
They nod, relieved that I'm okay. I let go of Dunk and swim after him.
Than I get a terrible cramp in my belly.
"Dunk," I gasp for breath.
"What's wrong?" he asks frightened and grabs my arms.
"Cramp," I groan. After a couple of seconds the cramp disappears. "I got a terrible cramp in my belly," I say.
"Okay, let's get out of the water," he says and wants to swim to the boat.
"No, really, I'm okay. Just check if there's no seaweed or big fish or other creepy things in the water here," I shake my head.
"Okay," he nods and dives under water. Soon he comes up again.
"Nothing creepy. No weed, no fish, only a tiny water snake," he smiles.
A snake? I swim back to the boat and climb in it as fast as I can. I sit down on the floor on a towel, with my head on my knees and my arms folded around my legs.
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Joined: 01 Jun 2006 Posts: 158 Location: sweet old Holland
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CHAPTER 5
I'm very cold. Duncan climbs back in after me. He puts a big warm towel around me and sits down behind me, with his arms and legs wrapped around me.
"What's wrong?" he whispers in my ear.
"I'm terrified of snakes," I answer.
"But I said it was only a tiny water snake. They're not dangerous, they're not even poisonous," he quietly says.
"I know, but I'm still terrified of them," I answer.
"You're cold," he says and rubs my arms and legs. "How's that possible? There's a hot sun and you've been in the water only a short time," he asks.
"Fright. I got frightened three times in only a couple of minutes. That chills you to the bone," I say.
"Oh, come here you sweet little girl," he whispers and turns me around
I sit on his lap and wrap my legs around his waist. He pulls me close to him, and he warms me with his body. He keeps on whispering sweet lovely words in my ear. He relaxes me by rubbing my back and shoulders.
After a while I can finally smile again.
"You silly little girl. How can you be so terrified of snakes?" he asks smiling.
"I don't know. As a little kid I sometimes had nightmares about snakes. Maybe once I've seen a terrible movie with snakes, but I don't remember," I shrug my shoulders.
"Are you afraid of getting into the water now?" he asks.
"Not if you go first, and check if there aren't any snakes, seaweed or other things that can scare me," I shake my head.
"Okay, I'll do that for you," he smiles. I give him a kiss.
"You're getting warm again," he says and takes the towel from me.
"Actually, I'm getting hot," I say.
"Should we go and sit in the shadow?" he asks.
"No, I'm getting hot for you," I smile naughty.
"Oh," he grins at me and gives me a deep kiss.
I turn around to see if the others are coming back to the boat yet, but they're still swimming. I lie down and pull Duncan with me. I roll on top of him and start kissing him on his chest, neck, ears, face, almost everywhere. I feel him getting a hard one. I look at his shorts and see that Duncan starts to blush.
"That's the first time you're getting hard from me," I grin naughty.
"No, it's just the first time that you see it. I got it many times when I was lying in bed, thinking of you," he grins.
"Also when I was lying in bed wíth you?" I ask.
"Yeah, also. But I turned away so you wouldn't notice. I didn't want you to think bad of me," he nods.
"Really? I never noticed. But I do notice it now," I say and give him a long kiss.
"Oh-oh. I think they are coming back," I say when I hear the others swim nearer to the boat.
"Turn around," he says and I roll off him, onto my back.
Dunk lies next to me, on his side, with one leg on my legs, so they won't see that he has a hard one. He rests his head on his arm and we pretend to be chatting about normal things.
The other guys are indeed coming back to the boat.
"We're getting something to eat. Do you want something?" Ant asks. Actually I'm getting quite hungry.
"Yeah, we'll join you in a couple of minutes," Dunk nods.
"In a couple of minutes? We're getting something to eat nów. We eat everything if you don't hurry up," Simon says.
"Yeah, yeah. We're not in a hurry," Dunk says and starts chatting quietly to me again.
"Don't you understand? He has a hard dick," Lee laughs out loud. "He can't come now!"
"Why are you thinking that? You're always thinking about sex, you pervert," I call out to him.
"Are you saying it's not true?" Lee laughs.
"I don't have to tell you anything," I shake my head.
"Come on," Duncan says and sits upright. Thank God, his hard one disappeared just in time. Maybe Lee making fun of him helped a little. Dunk stands up, takes my hand and pulls me up. We go to the others and get some of the breads that they had brought.
While we're getting lunch I get another cramp in my belly. Oh no, I hope I'm not getting my period now!
I go downstairs to the toilet. Shit, I'm getting my period indeed! I'm taking a strong painkiller, because I know I will have terrible cramps in my belly soon.
I go back upstairs.
"Anyone who wants to play cards?" Simon asks. Lee and Ant nod. Duncan looks at me questioning.
"I don't feel like playing cards. But you can play if you want to," I say to him.
"Okay, I'm coming to play cards," he says to the others. I go back to the towels to sunbathe. Dunk follows me.
"Is anything wrong? You don't look happy," he asks worried.
"I'm getting my period. That's also why I had that cramp in the water," I tell him.
"Will you have more cramps?" he asks worried.
"Yeah, but I already took a painkiller. It will start working in about half an hour, so that's all right. But I can't go to bed with you when I'm having my period, it's too painful," I say with a sad face.
"That's okay. You can't do anything about it. I don't care. As long as you're okay, I'm happy," he says very sweet. I smile at him and give him a kiss.
"Go play cards," I say and point at the other guys.
"First I'll put sunscreen on you. They can wait," he smiles. "Front or back?"
"Front. Because I can't lie on my belly now," I answer. I lie down on my back and he start putting sunscreen on me. When he touches my belly, I get a cramp. Dunk quickly takes his hands off me.
"I'm sorry," he says frightened.
"It's not your fault," I say and try to smile. "Go on."
He goes on. When he's almost finished I get another, more terrible cramp.
"Fuck," I groan and turn to lie on my side. Duncan looks very worried.
"Hey, it's normal, I'm used to it," I smile at him. "Go on, play cards. I'll be fine," I say.
He gives me a kiss and leaves reluctantly. I lie back on my back and try to sleep. But of course when I want to sleep, I can't. I try to think of the lovely time I will spent with Dunk the coming days, to forget my cramps. But they're still getting worse.
I sit upright and bend over because of another cramp. I decide to go downstairs for a while, because I don't want the guys to see me like this.
Halfway to the stairs I stand still because of another cramp.
"Are you okay?" Simon asks. The others now also look at me.
"Yeah, I'm fine," I lye. I go downstairs and lie down on the couch.
"You're not all right," I hear Duncan saying.
"I didn't hear you following me," I say surprised. "Please leave. I have to be alone for a short time," I ask him.
"Oh, okay. If that's what you want," he says with a sad face.
"But it's very sweet that you came to check on me," I smile at him.
He smiles back and gives me a kiss. He leaves and I hear the others talking to him. I hear my name a couple of times, but I can't hear what they're saying.
I lie down on the couch until my cramps almost disappear. I go upstairs and see that they're really busy playing cards.
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Michy<3 Just Warming Up
Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 5901 Location: Chester, UK
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| feelingduncan wrote: | everybody should read 'Tell me i'm not dreaming' by Natasha and Michelle! Great fic, and it has just started!!!!!
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Thaaanks!
Wkd adds!
Bless Dunky being worried of you and your cramps!
He's a real cutie!
More soon!
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Catherine UBNewbie

Joined: 17 May 2006 Posts: 242 Location: Kerry, Ireland
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Woooooooooooooooooooo!!!
One of my favourite fics from the old home!!!
Great adds!!
Add more soon.
Cat xxx _________________
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